Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Too Little, Too Late

Sunday, March 12, 2006

Inara counsels Kaylee, River understands and Simon gets a lesson in consequences. Brief references to adult activities.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3552    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Ain’t mine, didn’t get paid, just do it for love. Thanks to Joss ‘n crew for a all the magic, Jacqui for encouragement and great beta, and to you, kind readers. After all, I’m not just writin’ this stuff for myself.

Feedback, comments and encouragement all welcomed. You can comment down below or e-mail me at Lumenea@aol.com.

Setting: : Shortly after my series, “Quickies”. It’s hell when your characters get consciences.

TOO LITTLE, TOO LATE

“Kaylee, you’ve got to tell him.” The two women, one dark and elegant, one fair and fresh-faced, are reflected in the window of a drygoods shop. Above them, the sun is hot and harsh.

They continue to talk as they stroll together through the market.

“Oh, I know, ‘Nara. I been tryin’ to figure out what to say to him for two weeks and ain’t got it worked out yet. I just don’t wanna hurt him none. He’s a sweet fella, real swai and all, but…“

“I know, sweetie. You tried so hard and it isn’t as if he didn’t have every chance in the ‘Verse to speak up and make his feelings known.” Inara thinks of another man inept at expressing his emotions.

Kaylee stands very still for a minute, then tips her head and looks at her confidante. “That was part of the problem. When he did speak up, it kept comin’ out all manner of sideways, and I’d wind up feelin’ mad and frustrated. I just felt like I had to try so hard all the time and things still didn’t work right.”

“Don’t blame yourself, mei-mei. Some men can be incredibly dense when it comes to relating to a woman.”

“That’s only part of the problem, see? What if I tell him and he gets all mad or something an’ tells Mal?“ The girl sticks her hands in her pockets and scuffs her boots in the dust. “It’s already way too complicated…“

The mid-day sun is stifling. Inara notices a tea shop across the street and suggests. “Let’s go get something cool to drink and we can continue our conversation in a more comfortable setting.”

They make their way through the raucous crowd and

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Sunday, 12 March 2006 20:56
He's brilliant, but not too bright...
Sunday, 12 March 2006 21:41
I'd like to take this opportunity to hit Simon over the head with something heavy and tell him he's an idiot... however I'd probably have to queue up with everyone else and that sounds like a long wait!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:02
*sigh* That's Simon sorted.......

...... now let's see Kaylee sort it out with Jayne, ya know, letting him now how much he matters to her, that he's not just her 'bit on the side' to sneak around with.

I wonder how the other are going to take it? Inara took it well, but maybe Mal'll get mad with Jayne and try to put him out the airlock........

Don't leave us waiting too long to find out what happens next..... we may move onto another fanfic, just like Kaylee did to Simon!!!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:47
I love Inara's insights and Kaylee's "Too little, too late." So true.

This series is so great! Now we need to know how the others react?
Sunday, 12 March 2006 23:40
I love River's take on the whole thing, Simon is a boob. When will he start understanding her? More please!
KAIE
Sunday, 12 March 2006 23:42
Love this piece of the story.

Matter of fact, love the all the pieces. This is a great series.

Can't wait for the next part!
KAIE
Sunday, 12 March 2006 23:43
Sorry . . .That would be "love all the pieces"

Having a bit of a moon-brain kind of day.
Monday, 13 March 2006 02:55
Too Little Too Late. I love the drawing; that is truly perfect!
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 03:43
Ah, the total boobness of Simon. I love it! I also love Inara's empathy, and River's drawing - so very perfect.

I can really see Simon as being the one to spill the proverbial beans now that he's aware of what's going on. For a doctor, that man is damn stupid.
Monday, 24 April 2006 18:38
*giggle* who WOULDN'T pick jayne?!?

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