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River's Dinner Countdown

Sunday, March 12, 2006

No spoilers for anything. Just a fic about River's favorite time of day. Dinner time with her crew. Wacky fun!

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River stared up at the ceiling in her room. She was painting with her mind the Sistine Chapel on the ceiling. She was about to finish her favorite part when her stomach growled. It was almost dinner time. Dinner was River’s favorite time of the day. Not so much because she was hungry, but because she knew that everyone would be there. And for five minutes, 300 seconds, 300,000 milliseconds, 300,000,000 microseconds, 300,000,000,000 nanoseconds everyone on Serenity would be getting along. That was always until Jayne said something dumb, the captain called Inara a whore, Simon would say something to upset Kaylee, Wash made a sarcastic remark, Zoë not really saying much of anything, and Shepherd Book would always be the one to bring order back to the table. Despite his hair River thought he had calmness about him that she liked and feared at the same time.

Everyday before River would go to dinner she imagine different scenarios of what would happen at dinner. River would go play by play each scenario in her head. She even did it in her crewmates voices.

Simon was helping Kaylee cook dinner. She handed him some veggies to cut up. She smiled when Simon gentled brushed her hands as she handed him the veggies. Simon just gave her a nervous grin. In her normal cheerful voice, “Let’s play truth or dare.”

Simon looked a bit uneasy. “Truth or dare…I don’t know.”

“Oh, stop being such a fuddy duddy.” Kaylee playfully threw some food at Simon. “Truth or dare?”

“Truth, I guess.” Simon took a deep breath.

Kaylee turns around and faces him and smiles, “Name three things that you like about me.”

Simon’s face turned three shades of red. He was totally caught off guard. “Hmm…let me think…I like your…” Simon paused for a moment. He didn’t want to say anything wrong. He graduated top 3% of his class, a genius some called him, but for the life of him he couldn’t think of three things he liked about Kaylee. “I like…I like your…you have nice…”

Kaylee was growing impatient. She could list thousands of things that she liked a

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 10:22
Wacky fun!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 11:47
wow i like this alot, please if you EVER up at 4 am doing laundry or whatever and you feel like writing do not hesitate this was wonderful. if you think of anything else to add or hell even just something else that has nothing to do with this post it. it was fun. -OldSoul1987
Sunday, 12 March 2006 11:52
Aww this was great. Petty bickering gets me every time!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 12:43
I like Wash fainting! And that River has the breakdown of friendly relations timed to the nanosecond. lol
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 13:12
shiny!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 16:13
sweet, wacky fun
~kaynara
Sunday, 12 March 2006 16:33
Very funny, I can't help wondering if the counting is until Zoe gets a contraction. This was so entertaining I kept laughing out loud! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 18:27
"There is a thud as Wash hits the floor."

Loved that part! Very funny.


Very good!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 20:25
Lovely little fic. You do River's perspective wonderfully.
Thursday, 16 March 2006 19:21
This is great. Everyone sounds like themselves. I mean in a lot of fics the writing is wonderful but the characters all sound like the writer (that's one of my biggest problems) but you really captured everyone's individual tone and feel.
Please give us more of your writing!
Monday, 24 April 2006 18:13
yay!! you should do more washing at 4am if it means you write more shiny like this...

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