Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Thinking things through part 12

Saturday, March 11, 2006

One step forward and one step back for Jayne and Kaylee.

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Kaylee was layin’ down under the engine beside Jayne. givin’ directions and chattering.

“Simon says I can get the cast off as soon as we pick up the Shepherd.”

Kaylee didn’t know what she was so excited ‘bout. Oh she was dying to have her arm back, to be able to do things for herself, to look after Serenity. But being better meant seeing a lot less of Jayne, she wouldn’t need his help so much in the engine room.

This last couple of weeks since their fishin’ expedition, and her touchin’ him, they’d been together even more than usual.

The Captain had got them out of the tussle with the other ship but that ended with Serenity’s engine and electrics all needin’ work. She, Jayne and Wash had spent days repairin’ the damage.

She’d been sleepin’ better to, after a day repairin’ all the damage, Kaylee was so tired that the bad dreams had no chance. When she did dream, she dreamt of Jayne, irritatin’ man! Her plan of goin’ slow was frustratin’ her all to hell.

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Jayne was goin’ crazy with Kaylee so close to him. The space under the engine was a tight fit when it was just him, with her there they were really scrunched up. Hips and shoulders touched, her hair got in his eyes and her feet kept nudging his. Every time she reached across him to point out somethin’ he missed, her breast would rub against his side.

The next time she reached over he weren’t expectin’ it and he jerked his arm in surprise catchin’ his knuckles on the sharp engine.

“Gorram it,” Jayne pulled himself out from beneath the engine knuckles drippin’ blood everywhere.

“Here, let me look.” Kaylee took his hand as she picked up the first aid kit, shakin’ her head at him when he started backin’ away.

“Don’t be a baby.” She started cleaning the cut with a wet swab.

Jayne watched the top of her head as she concentrated on his hand. It weren’t the pain that was buggin’ him; it was Kaylee’s intoxicatin’ touch. He kept imaginin’ her clever little hands all over his body, not just on his hand.

Comments
Saturday, 11 March 2006 14:52
Wait? What? No...

See, I think you're mistaken, twinkie, there's no "losing' of Kaylee. No. Not done.

Go find her. Yes, write the next chapter, go find Kaylee and have her make out lots with Jayne.

Absolutely, that's what you should do.

Also? Stupid Simon for walking in. Grrrr.
Saturday, 11 March 2006 14:54
Thank God Wash and the Captain stepped in, I was about ready to bash their fool heads together.

That last part doesn't sound good, though. Jayne gotta do some rescuin' now?
Saturday, 11 March 2006 15:55
Ahhhh! No! You can't lose Kaylee......

Hurry up and get Jayne to find her..... Then Kaylee has to tell him how she really feels...... And Jayne tells her how he really feels....... Then Jayne and Kaylee get to make out alot!!

Put us out of our misery, Bookaddict!!
Saturday, 11 March 2006 18:32
ok, ditto everything above! Hurry, Kaylee might get hurt- then Jayne would have to kill Simon,well Simon...no hurry anyway!
Saturday, 11 March 2006 18:58
I accept that I have to wait for the rest if it involves Jayne finding Kaylee and that leads to all kinds of, well, you know, 'understanding'...no more thinking things through, just 'doing'!

Saturday, 11 March 2006 19:37
Kaylee & Jayne? That's just wrong.
Saturday, 11 March 2006 22:40
This was a great part and I loved Wash and Kaylee giving her advice about Jayne, made me chuckle so much. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 11 March 2006 23:36
Please keep it coming; I hate the big waits between editions!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 00:17
Tell me that Jayne will rescue Kaylee, please!
He has to!
I love this bookaddict, your series has been wonderful, keep 'em coming :D
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Monday, 13 March 2006 00:37
Seriously not fair!!!!!!!
How could you end this chapter like that???
You enjoy making us all crazy with anticipation don't you.
(Sticks out bottom lip as far as possible and beging to pout.)
Not fair.


This story is progressing amazingly and I can't wait to read more!
I especially love how clueless Simon was about the change in Kaylee's feelings.
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Monday, 13 March 2006 00:38
That is 'posed to be an "s" at the end of begin. apparently I am unable to type.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 21:00
omg, please continue this story, i am so ready for it to continue. kaylee snatched...boo. must finish soon
Friday, 17 March 2006 16:45
i love kaylee/jayne:)

jayne is soooooo yummy!!
doc's to gorram purty.. yuck

anywho...
loving the story. loved how it was wash who made her realize you hafta be a little more obvious when it comes to jayne.
now my take is that the whole big crowd and law gatherin is cuz of jayne...
just my thoughts.
anyways, can't wait for the next bit, and hopefully jayne to the rescue!!
Sunday, 23 April 2006 17:07
er, did you just lose kaylee? get your fingers moving and SAVE her gorram it!!! no, change that. get JAYNE moving and save her.

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