Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Happy Birthday River!

Friday, February 24, 2006

Umm, I've been listening to Backstreet Boys, please don't hurt me!
Also I can almost hear preemptive voices in my head telling me about structure, well it was rushed and just a bit of fun

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Present Day- The Madness is beginning

"I'm jus sayin it's a shame is all." Kaylee pouted at the Captain, her big eyes set on maximum charm. Mal looked at the itty bitty mechanic and sighed. "Aright gorram it girl, but on one condition- you gotta convince the others, and that includes Jayne." Kaylee stood on tip-toe to throw her arms around her Captain's neck, certain that the others would be a snap.

Two Weeks Prior to the Madness

Kaylee and Inara were having some rare quiet time in the kitchen, sipping their tea in peace. It was so peaceful that Inara glanced at Kaylee- the air wasn't peppered with her usual chatter. "Kaylee, honey is anything wrong?" The companion looked at the young mechanic thoughtfully. Shaking out of her thoughts Kaylee smiled. "Simon said it was River's 18th next week and I was just thinking about when I was a teenager." Inara didn't say anything just smiled a little wider and turned to the mechanic wondering where her thoughts were headed. "Well I was thinking about how my girlfriends and I would look stay up late watching the cortex, listening to the Back-Alley Boys and watching movies with all our favorite stars." Inara laughed softly, not so much at Kaylee, but more the thought of how similar her own teenage years had been. Zoe had walked into the kitchen to make Wash and herself some coffee and said "I think every girl in the verse had a crush on Joey." Smiling at the mechanic and the companion to let her know it was herself included. "Not me," said Kaylee her grin widening at the thought of Zoe as a young woman "I loved Sean." Inara felt a small blush to her cheeks and said softly "You're both wrong, Brian was the most swai." All three women erupted in laughter, so much so that Mal poked his head around to see what the fuss was about. When confronted with the three women, laughing he quickly decided to bid a hasty retreat.

Kaylee bit her lip, descending from mirth into deep thought much more quickly than either women would have thought possible. "Kaylee, hon

Comments
Friday, 24 February 2006 10:27
heheh thank you, this was funny the only thing that botherd me was how you miss spelled Inara's name at first.... you can miss spell anything and i wont care much but you gotta have the crew names right. ok well al in all this has funny i almost never read anything that is not mainly mal inara but this was good. Just cause the idea of the guys dressed like a boy band has crossed my mind and i though it was a good idea. funny stuff really.
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Friday, 24 February 2006 11:05
I think spellcheck is to blame for Inara's name.
Friday, 24 February 2006 12:14
I have to admit I wouldn't know a Backstreet Boy if I fell over one, but I enjoyed this story and the song.

What a nice birthday present!

"She fixed him with her widest, sunniest smile and biggest doe eyes, as she made her bottom lip wobble just a fraction. " I like this description of Kaylee's wiles.
Friday, 24 February 2006 17:08
Not that I could ever see this happening but that's what make it's fun! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 February 2006 19:35
HEHEHEHE!! I don't think I've laughed this hard all day. I could just picture it...it's a little far-fetched, but cute and sweet all the same!!! Great job!
Friday, 24 February 2006 19:38
Ok folks, I know it's far-fetched, but seriously I couldn't help it- blame it on the evils of pop-music!

:D
Friday, 24 February 2006 19:43
One last thing- I forgot to turn off the auto-spell check when I wrote this, but I fixed the spelling, I'm sorry that I didn't check it, usually I'm more careful
Monday, 03 April 2006 18:05
sQuEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeE!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!! just picturing them now puts a smile on my face!!! ooh, that gives me an idea...

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