Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Sunday's Child

Saturday, February 4, 2006

Ok so I love that children's rhyme about the days of the week- the seventh line is: And the child born on the Sabbath day is bonny and blithe and full of gay- Just read and Feedback like a chocolate-chip brownie is always appreciated.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3409    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Sunday's child

Kaylee sat at the table, munching on a protein snack. When her Captain walked in, followed by Simon and the rest of the crew. "We havin a meetin Captain?" She asked brightly. They were all smiling and looking at her- like they had a secret. Even Jayne looked genuinely pleased. "Well we've got a little surprise cooking for out favorite mechanic- how would you like a trip home?" Kaylee sprung out of her seat and lunged at Mal. Throwing her arms around his neck, with a beaming smile plastered on her face, she then went and hugged the other crew members- mainly just because they were there but also because of the suprise.

Mrs Frye liked telling the story of the day her only girl was born. How in the middle of a freezing cold and unusually harsh winter the day of her labour had been laden with warmth and sunshine, about the ease of the birth and how eight hours later she'd been presented with biggest smile in the verse- attached to the bonniest little baby that the town would ever see. She would tell the story to anyone who would listen and at this point of time it was the crew of Serenity. She had the entire crew's attention- even Jayne's, what little attention he had to give. Kaylee had noted as she sat next to her ma, blushing fiercely. Simon held her hand, squeezing it when her mother reached the end of her tale. "I knew that you had been born beautiful, bao-bei" He whispered, kissing her cheek as he handed her another strawberry.

That evening in the Frye's warm and cozy sitting room, with Kaylee asleep in Simon's lap, like a house cat in her favorite chair. He and Mr Frye spoke frankly on many topics, including Simon's intentions with Kaylee. Simon looked down at Kaylee his eyes glowing as he spoke of how much he cared for her but as usual it wasn't what Simon said it was the expression on his face as he spoke. "I know sir," said Simon as he watched Kaylee with love shining in his eyes "that I may never be able to give her the stability that she could have here, but I p

Comments
Saturday, 04 February 2006 16:53
This was a very sweet collection. Excellent Job!:D:D:D
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 16:57
A truely excellent job, though I'm ashamed to say that I had not heard this nursery rhyme before.
-gobluebuy
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 18:25
All the awww's in the verse :)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 18:27
I *knew* the seventh chapter would be about Kaylee. I don't remember the exact words, but I remembered enough to know that Kaylee's definatly Sunday child :)
~ misskitten
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 22:13
I always loved this rhyme, and how perfectly it fits the Serenity crew. I knew when I started reading it Kaylee would be Sunday's child. Thanks so much!
Sunday, 05 February 2006 12:17
Of course Kaylee is Sunday's child and you wrote her well. I like the description of her birth.
Sunday, 12 February 2006 21:12
the poem fits the crew so well, it's almost enough to make you wonder if the whole series was just joss's attempt at a songfic...

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Tuesday, 28 February 2006 23:27
awwww. Just read your whole series of this and awhttp://www...adoreableness! and oh so accurate!

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