Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

To make love

Thursday, February 23, 2006

Four drabbles written for the several_ways community at Live Journal. Challenge Several ways to make love. POVs from Kaylee, Mal, Inara & Jayne.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3319    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A continuation of the Twelve days of Christmas story arc.

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All manner of hot

Kaylee ran down the stairs jumping from the last step straight into Jayne’s arms. He always caught her, never let her fall. Biceps bulging his arms engulfed her, surrounded her, and made her all manner of hot for him.

She weren’t forgettin’ that she’d nearly lost him not long back; needed to make sure he was there, hers. She needed his brand of lovin’.

Her big, mean, ornery, wonderful man made love the same way he did everything else, with concentration. Sometimes it was rough though he never hurt her, sometimes messy and quick, sometimes so tender and slow she almost melted, sometimes fun, and sometimes needy.

Today it was needy, him for her and her for him, they weren’t even gonna make it to their bunk. The mixture of desire and heat that she knew was in her eyes struck an answerin’ spark in his. Pullin’ her under the catwalk into the darkest recesses of Serenity, Jayne growled low and deep makin’ her shiver with need.

He lifted her up so they were breast to chest, hearts beatin’ against each other, lips caressin’ lips, all raw emotions between them. All four hands fumbled with zips, skimmin’ over skin, pushin’ clothes aside. Kaylee wrapped her legs round his hips drawin’ him closer to her moist depths moanin’ as he thrust deep inside.

She traced her hands over his back in time with the quick, deep strokes, Jayne fillin’ her like no man ever had. They moved in unison, tongues tanglin; mouths swallowing each other’s moans till they leant together shaking and sated, not sayin’ anythin’, just breathin’ together.

Restin’, forehead to forehead, one arm cradling her to him, the other strokin’ her body gently, Jayne still hot inside her started movin’ again, slower this time, Kaylee was in heaven.

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All manner of uncomfortable

Over the last few months Mal had had time to come to terms with another shipboard romance. And Kaylee and Jayne

Comments
Thursday, 23 February 2006 14:32
I.

Love.

You.

So very much. Honestly, this was all manner of beautiful.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 14:52
You brought tears to my eyes! That was wonderful. *sighs wistfully*
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 15:41
Nicely written but jayne and kaylee? ugh. Not going there.
NINAC
Thursday, 23 February 2006 15:46
Gorgeous! (welling up)
Thankyou..
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 15:48
She writes to his ma? Now that’s a piece of fluff I haven’t seen in Jaylee fanfic. Very cute and I’m not one for fluff.
Thursday, 23 February 2006 16:40
I have no idea how to thank you for that.
It's perfect.
I can't even say anything else.
I got tingles and tears.
I tell you all the time that I love reading your work, and I do.
Keep 'em coming!!
Thursday, 23 February 2006 17:15
I've got this big grin on my face.
It's Fluff.
It's Perfect.
I've got to go and re-read it now.
Thursday, 23 February 2006 17:30
Just perfect!

Kaylee and Jayne are just so perfect together - and the way you write them together is realy sweet and lovely.

And the parts with Mal and Inara are so bitter sweet - kinda reminds me of Chinese cooking - you know, sweet and sour sauce...... That just fits in with the Firefly 'verse - all oriental influences....

Altogether, this is real Shiny, Bookaddict. Keep it coming, girlfriend!
Thursday, 23 February 2006 19:41
Brilliant! And wow, your insight into Inara was almost painful. As sorry as I sometimes feel for the Captain, in her way Inara is much more closed off but more tragically so because she of all people should know better. Being a Companion should free her of the uncertainties others get hung up on but instead it has the opposite affect on her because this is love, not play acting. This is revealing her true self for once and for all and without the mask she would be more naked that Saffron has ever been. Loved the practical approach of Kaylee and Jayne, it suits them. And Zoe's pragmatism is perfect for her and Wash. Kudos to you, this was masterful. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 23 February 2006 20:57
There are no words, you took them all. Bravo!!
Friday, 24 February 2006 03:12
How is it that with each story you just get better and better?

*sighs*

This was... just fabulous. You capture them so perfectly, and write them how it should have been. (*grumps* Stupid Simon). ;P
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 23:32
Cute. Love the Jaylee. Though, that last part has some pretty intrestin' mental immages spinnin' in my head of Jayne being a daddy... kinda scary actully.

yay Jaylee!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 13:01
*swallows lump in throat* awwww...!!! someone pass me a tissue, i'm all manner of tearful for this utterly luvverly piece of gorgeous fluff...

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