Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Waited Long Enough Part Eight: Just Rewards

Monday, February 20, 2006

Some things are worth waiting for, and some turn out to be even better than expected. Jayne/Kaylee. Definitely NC 17/R.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3853    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: They ain’t my characters and it ain’t my ‘verse and no money changed hands. Thank You List includes Joss and the gang for inspiration, Jacqui the Goddess of Jaylee for beta and a great deal of support and encouragement, and to my own dear big, bad man for providing certain, …er, technical resources and guidance especially the live action walk through on certain challenging bits. Bein’ as this is my very first fanfic, all comments, suggestions and feedback are most appreciated. E-mail me at Lumenea@aol.com. If ya don’t wanna talk, please just click a rating. Can’t make it better if I don’t know what’s broke.

Waited Long Enough Part Eight: Just Rewards

Slowly, the pounding of Kaylee’s heart eased off an’ she began to catch her breath as the sweet flood of sensation gently ebbed.

Jayne pushed himself up from his knees an’ stood grinnin’ down at her from the table’s end, his lips an’ beard moist with her juices. She’d tasted every bit as sweet as he’d imagined.

He was pleased at her ecstatic response to his pleasurin’ of her, and patted her hip fondly. Had her motor idlin’, time to open up the throttle a tad.

“You ready for Round Two, lil’ Kaylee?” he asked her, making it quite clear that a negative response wasn't an option.

A slightly dazed Kaylee leaned back on her elbows, her head tip-tilted and her lower lip nipped between her teeth in that cute little way that made him crazy. She just grinned and mumbled, “Oh, yeah...”

”Then scoot on down here to me, if ya will, sweet girl,” he asked.

Jayne paused for a minute to collect himself and thought, All manner of mayhem is gonna break loose if this gets back to Mal, an’ I don’t give a rat’s ass if it does. That hwoon dahn can shoot me and I'd do her all over again. If she don’t care, then I sure as hell ain’t gonna, either.

He unbuckled his belt an’ thumbed open the button that secured his waistband, then unzipped his fly an’ allowed the loosened pants to settle around his thighs. His cock, at last released

Comments
Monday, 20 February 2006 01:10
So sweet and so hot!
Monday, 20 February 2006 02:24
Oh my dear and fluffy Lord! Kinda hard to type a comment when your palms are all sweaty, y'know? ;P

I am completely entralled by this tale, you write so well. And hey, now all we need is for the rest of the crew to walk in, and you've got the most perfect Jaylee fic ever! Can't wait to see their reactions to this development.
Monday, 20 February 2006 11:41
Hot, hot. I love that last line!

Monday, 20 February 2006 14:25
Aw, shucks, folks, you're all mighty kind. I love writing about these two, but even better is writin' about them and sharing it. More to come. And thanks agin to Jacqui, who's been so much help.
Monday, 20 February 2006 15:32
I LOVE THIS!!
You actually managed to make smut sweet, and it was glorious on both accounts.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 18:32
This is AWESOME. Keep it coming.
Monday, 20 February 2006 23:05
New to Firefly and the site, and lookie what I found my very first visit! Honey, keep it coming! Excuse me, think I'm having me a hot flash!
Saturday, 11 March 2006 15:33
"Jayne gazed down in wonder. This girl had somehow captured him without a knife or gun, had breached the many-layered armor that guarded his heart."

*plans kaylee's mysterious disappearance*

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Monday, 15 August 2011 17:46
hot dang....

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