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The Visit-Zoë’s Tale

Wednesday, February 15, 2006

Zoë has to deliver some very bad news in this post-BDM story. Those who have not yet seen the film should steer clear of this tale, it's very spoiler heavy.

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Spoiler warning: This story takes place a few months after Serenity, the film. It deals heavily with some very major spoilers from the film. I'm operating under the assumption that the refit Serenity undergoes at the end of the movie takes, at minimum, one month.

This is the fifth story in the Tales series. The rest can be found here:

River, Wash, Mal, Kaylee, Simon, Inara, Jayne, Book

Rated PG for some mild language.

Thanks go out to my much appreciated beta-ers. Thanks ladies.

*****

Zoë Washburne was alone in her bunk.

Serenity had landed hours ago. The crew was mended and the ship was mostly repaired. There’d been that buffer panel that’d fallen off during the burn out of Persephone, but Kaylee had managed to get that problem fixed. She needed a few new parts to finish the work. As it was, Serenity was holding together mostly by her gumption alone. The captain wanted to try and find a new job for them while they were here. He figured that the time was ripe to go out and make a bit more money. It was either time to capitalize on the fame they’d earned from Miranda or try and make some funds before the Alliance got testy and the hammer fell. Simon and Kaylee were planning on turning her parts run into an evening on the town. Jayne and the Captain were going to try and sniff out a few new contacts. They intended to bring River along to sniff out any deception that might be about. Inara had a client lined up that involved her taking the shuttle off by herself.

And that left Zoë alone on Serenity.

She’d insisted on coming here right off after the ship had been repaired. She didn’t have a choice in the thing. It never got any easier, telling them. She’d had to do it a hundred times in the wa

Comments
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 00:37
Lovely! Sad, reflective and a very fine piece of introspection for Zoe. Just miss our very fine leaf on the wind... Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
SAGEALA
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 02:05
I loved how the mother already could feel that Wash was dead. That's very true to life. You did a great job, wrote Zoë perfectly.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 03:20
Fantastic story!! The only flaw, & a tiny one at that, is where it was stated that she had to work on the captain, to warm him up to wash. As I recall from the episode 'out of gas', the captain was 'pro-Wash' from the start, and that Zoe didn't like him at first. (presumably, it was the moustache) Still, excellent work!
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 03:47
Actually, what I meant with Zoe needing to get the captain to warm up wasn't to wash himself, but to the thought of Zoe marrying Wash. Little things, I guess. ;)
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 14:14
You bastard!! You made me cry at work!! My coworkers thought I was nuts!! Anyways, great story!!!
Friday, 17 February 2006 21:28
Sadly beautiful. Zoe and Wash are standards; their relationship will always be something I compare any great relationship to. The grief of her losing him was excellently staged here. You did a great job.
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 05:01
I actually teared up. That's why I don't read post BDM Wash and Zoe stories they alwasys make the sad. :(
Good story.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:12
*sniffle* so sad and beautiful...i miss wash *consoles self with jayne*

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 17:58
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for a bit of closer. I too cried at work, thankfully no one else was around. And thank goodness Zoe had a safe place to break down and cry. I know we'll all miss Wash, my only solace is the fact that Joss said if there was another season Wash and Book would be back. Don't know how he plans to fix it but in the Visual Companion he says this and gives me hope. Patti
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 04:44
This was a very touching tribute to their relationship. Thanks.

Oh, and the goslings? Perfect.

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