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No One to Carry Me-Mal’s Tale

Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Alone and surrounded by Alliance troops, Malcolm Reynolds faces the most staggering loss he has ever experienced. A character piece exploring Mal's crisis of faith.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3810    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This story is set before the series, so there are no spoilers to speak of.

This is the third story in my "Tales" series, so check out the others if you take a liking to this one! They can be found here:

River, Wash, Kaylee, Zoë, Simon, Inara, Jayne, Book

Rated PG for some adult language.

Thanks go out to my much appreciated beta-ers. Thanks ladies.

Go-se=Crap

Wong Ba Duhn=Son of a bitch

Ni Bu Ying Duh Jur Guh=You don’t deserve it

Dohn-ma=Understand

*****

Malcolm Reynolds felt the gravel crunch beneath his feet.

As Mal walked alone along the edge of Serenity Valley, he made a point to keep his head low, under the trench. There used to be grass here, but the Alliance had killed all of it. The Alliance was like some damnable sickness; everything it touched shriveled up and died like a calf that got rejected by its ma. He looked over to his left and then to his right. The bodies were still there, everywhere. He’d figured that his nose might have done him a kindness and just ignored the gorram smell. He was wrong, again.

It wasn’t like Mal hadn’t ever seen death before. He’d been in the war for years now. He’d liked to have said that he’d lost track of everyone who’d died, but he hadn’t. Their faces kept coming back up in his head. Their names weren’t ever far behind. Some of those folks were friends, some weren’t. But he still remembered them. A body couldn’t forget it when a man died in his arms. Every detail got imprinted in the brain like a snapshot. Mal could remember the look in the eyes, the sounds of the last breaths, and the feeling of a body going limp.

He remembered the first man he had ever seen die. He was a private on Ezra with a hole in his belly, who kept begging him to fi

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Tuesday, 31 January 2006 07:50
Wow. That was awesome. Excellent insight into Mal's view of God.
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 10:53
Absolutely brilliant! I loved the way you delineated Mal reasoning out the pros and cons of his faith and how much all the death and desolation of war hurt him. Losing all those good people to what seems to be the whim of an absent uncaring God. And the very human way in which Mal does not see himself as a good man, seeing only the lives he has taken and those he could not save, was heart wrenching because he is a good man if only because of how much he cares, how much those losses hurt him, how much he *tries*. Fabulous, bravo. Not nobody could have done this better. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 15:01
Powerful! Awesome! Amazing! Superb! Heartwrenching! Beautiful! I could go on, but you get the idea. This look at Mal and his loss of faith is so good it could be canon!
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:00
"The way he figured it, if God ever wanted him back, He’d find him. And He’d better have a DAMNED good explanation when He did."
mal is not a man even the Almighty wants to cross.

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Friday, 17 February 2006 22:32
I too, enjoyed this very much. The last two sentences were pitch-perfect. Thank you!
Monday, 06 March 2006 20:25
Wow, so well done! It really gets to the heart of Mal's anger. Poor guy!

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