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Saturday, February 11, 2006

Because a picture is worth a thousand words. Here, there are five. Warning - Slash, Mal/Simon).

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2823    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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1.Colour, 'Serenity', kitchen, 10 x 12

Simon is sitting on the couch, one leg thrown over the other. He is reading - a book is spread open on his laps, and he appears engrossed in it. With two long, nimble fingers he plays with his bottom lip, without realizing he is doing so.

He is casually dressed – at least, less casually than normally – in a loose black shirt and grey trousers. His dark hair is tousled a little, as if he had just woken up or as though he had been running his fingers through it.

Mal is sitting some metres away, at the table. A steaming cup of something is in his hands, and his topaz-blue eyes are tense. He is leaning forward, ever so slightly, his intent gaze on the unaware doctor. There is something like – but is it really? - longing in those eyes, in the stubborn line of the mouth, in the way his entire body seems to be leaning towards Simon, in the whiteness of the knuckles that grip the cup...

2. Sepia, 'Serenity', corridor, 10 x 12

Simon and Mal are alone. They had clearly just walked one into another - the two are standing at angles to each other, their shoulders touching.

They are looking straight into each other's eye; even though Simon, the shorter, has to look up - something that makes him appear vulnerable and young.

Mal's hand rests on Simon's shoulder, as though he had put it there to steady the doctor. The captain looks slightly taken aback, though not embarrassed, and a little defensive smile plays on his lips.

Simon's lovely, pale face is flushed, a faint blush highlighting his ivory cheeks. He looks as though he is about to double-back. It is evident he is experiencing a mixture of fear, embarrassment and surprise – his lips are slightly parted, and eyes saucer-wide, but even though he probably shouldnt, he loves the warm touch, the comforting weight of that hand.

The whole picture is rather dark, the corridor being inadequately lit, and the tenseness of the moment is very evident. Tenseness that had come about because of such a mundane thing a

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 19:12
Another amazing piece! You write Mal/Simon so well, so realistically! You must keep going with pieces like these!

~Wanmei (forgot to sign in)~
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 20:23
Would you please tarnish something less extraordinary than Firefly with your next piece, please?
Saturday, 11 February 2006 20:28
Oh well... Some you win, some you lose. Wanmei, glad you liked it! And I only write Mal/Simon so well because I love the pairing...
KPO
Saturday, 11 February 2006 22:24
Good for what it is, but these aren't the characters I know from firefly.

I'm gonna change the names and think of this as a Ennis/Jack brokeback mountain fanfic
Sunday, 12 February 2006 00:08
Excellent and so lovingly crafted. It is very obvious you have a flair for the characters and I like how you handle their tentative moves into a relationship without reducing it to smut. A very unusual take, seeing them through the camera lens. Very fine piece of writing, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 12 February 2006 03:16
Brighit, welcome to the world of M/S slash, not everybody likes it--but some of us do. *g*

This was beautifully done. Took me a sec to figure out the titles, *slaps head* but once I did--perfect. Makes me wonder, though, who took that last snapshot? *G*

Looking forward to your future endeavors.

"I love my captain."
Sunday, 12 February 2006 04:47
Anonymous (80.202.185.212) = Troll...

I liked this alot. And anyone who didn't really can't appreciate good solid wonderfully written slash!

I think I forgot some commas in that last sentance, but who cares!

My dear, keep up the fantastic work! I applaud you and your originallity!
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 17:54
ignore the trolls and concentrate on the mal/simon...they lovely, especially the way you write them. really sweet.

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