Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Starry Sky

Saturday, February 11, 2006

A fluffy Valentine's Day Mal/Simon fic.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2687    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N - It's slash. Don't read if you don't like.

The grass was a soft blanket under Simon's head. His eyes were closed, his body utterly relaxed. A small smile tugged at the corners of his pale lips. A smile of peace and happiness, the kind of smile that rarely visited his lovely face.

He had been here for hours now, just lying on the emerald grass, relishing it, basking in the vast open space, the cool, spring wind, the velvety black sky. Stars were beginning to be lit – one by one. He did not need to see each yellow light come to life - he could feel them. His hair was damp from the dew, as was his white shirt, but he did not care. For once, the young doctor was totally and completely at peace.

He heard footsteps, but did not open his eyes. A few moments later, a hand was lowered onto his shoulder. A gentle hand, calloused from hard labour and weapons.

'You've been here for so long,' Mal's quiet voice caressed Simon's ears like silk. The Captain lowered himself to sit next to Simon.

'It's so quiet...' Simon breathed. 'Just feel it. Can you feel the silence?'

'You're an awful romantic, Doc. Your clothes are wet and ants are crawling up your hand.'

'Mal!' Simon sat up, smiling.

'What?'

'You just have to go and ruin it all, don't you? I was enjoying peace, for once. It isn't like there's loads of it to be found on 'Serenity.''

'True... Ain't a person for peace and quiet, me. I like my adventure, ruckus and chaos.'

'That explains a lot,' Simon said, quietly. He leant forwards, burying his face in the Captain's black shirt.

Mal's hands went around the younger man's slender waist, almost reverently. He sighed, inhaling the sweet scent of herbs and mint and apple shampoo. No matter how much Mal loved Simon, he could not help but feel old when he was with the Doctor. Simon was full of youth and, despite all he'd been through, light and joy - and he was incredibly, unbelievably beautiful. Mal could not understand what Simon, a creature of such infinite grace, saw in a not-so-attra

Comments
Saturday, 11 February 2006 12:09
Loved this. Very lyrically written and the tenderness between the two was not sickly and cloying but beautiful. Well done, a nice romantic moment. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 11 February 2006 12:50
oh, sweet! Mal's insecurity fits so well in context. I always got the impression in canon that that was one reason why he never made any real moves on anybody. I definitely like.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 13:48
I, too, enjoyed this. Very soft and flowing, sweet and tender.

Grammatically, there are some mixed tenses that throw it off a bit. Otherwise, well done!

Keep writing!

"I love my captain."
Saturday, 11 February 2006 16:07
Kudos, everyone. Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, Mal/Simon is my soft spot...
Saturday, 11 February 2006 16:38
Wonderfully written! It flows so well, and it's so perfect.

You must write more! =)
Saturday, 11 February 2006 17:36
K the writing is good but well.
I dont think those 2 are gay
Saturday, 11 February 2006 17:38
But still(I should've posted this in my b4 message) You did make it so it wasn't offensive. But in my openion i didn't enjoy the overall conecpt.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 17:48
Soldier0Cross, everyone is subject to their own opinions, and I respect that. Just wanted to say that you WERE warned that it was slash, so in the future, if such material offends you/makes you uncomfortable, do stay away, just to spare yourself any uncomfortable feelings.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:14
I've never heard the term slash b4 so.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:15
But still you are a very good writer and may want to look into romance nolves as a future
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:34
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed my style, anyway. Those who are into the pairing - take a look at my new fic, 'Snapshots,' also Mal/simon.
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 20:54
*loves* ooh...i love it sooooooo much...huggles*

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