Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Motivation Series 14: Let It Rain

Friday, February 10, 2006

Simon's got a fantasy that Kaylee's happy to indulge. Leiasky and I decided to take a common theme and see what we each came up with, here's mine. We don't want votes or comments about whose is better, we just thought this would be fun. Also, please note the NC-17 rating!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3874    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee was on a mission. They were on Boros; Mal had made plans to meet with a contact about a potential job, but the contact hadn't shown, and now they were parked for at least another day while Mal got the whole situation straightened out.

For the past two days, it had been raining, solid sheets of water that had seemed to come without end. Now the weather finally seemed to have cleared up, and Kaylee wanted to take advantage of that while it lasted.

"Hey." She leaned into the common area and grinned at Simon. He was sitting on the couch with his feet on the table and an open book on his lap. She'd seen him with that book so many times, she figured that could only mean one thing. "Bored?"

Simon looked up at her and smiled. "Hey. Less than I was a minute ago." He closed the book and set it aside. "Where is everyone?"

"Cap'n and Zoe are on the bridge, Jayne's lifting in the cargo bay, and your sister's havin' tea with Inara in her shuttle." Kaylee replied. "I got a way we could pass the time."

"Do you?" Simon stood up and crossed the room. He wrapped one arm around her waist and pulled her close.

"Uh-huh." Kaylee turned away as he leaned in for a kiss. She leaned back through the doorway and picked up a basket and a blanket. "Feel like a picnic?"

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The weather on Boros was unusually warm, and the sky was clear except for a few clouds. In the woods not too far from where Serenity was hidden, Simon and Kaylee mostly ignored the food that she had brought and just lay in each other's arms on the worn blanket they had spread out on the ground. They talked about everything and nothing, content to watch the sky and be together.

At some point they both must have drifted off, because Simon was suddenly aware of a wet, cool sensation on his face and chest.

"Kaylee." Groaning softly, he leaned over and shook her awake. "Kaylee, wake up. It's raining again."

"Oh..." Kaylee frowned up at the sky as her eyes fluttered open. She yawned and stretched out her arms, then sa

Comments
Friday, 10 February 2006 06:32
Yay, do I actually get to be the first to review? Wow.

So....next you're writing the tea and warm-up session, right?

Simon all nervous about asking for what he wants and Kaylee not shy about it at all was great! Hee

And, ahh, sitting in one another's lap...such a lovely position.

All hot and steamy and....rainy!

I'll be waiting for the continuation to this.... I'll nag...you know I'm good at it...
Friday, 10 February 2006 06:37
Ah...late night smit. Fantastic once again! And great colaboration with Leiasky! God, such a perfect pairing... :) I give it a 10!
Friday, 10 February 2006 07:13
And that's two good ones! Now I'm all inspired.

<MG looks outside and crosses his fingers that it starts raining again>
Friday, 10 February 2006 08:04
Great work, yet again. This fic was a fun way to end my night :)
Friday, 10 February 2006 11:42
Simon said 'shiny'.
Cool!
Friday, 10 February 2006 12:27
And I'll ask you again, will you let me archive your fics in my archive!?! Seriosuly, yours was the first name I thought of when I decided to make it...

LOVED it!
Friday, 10 February 2006 14:09
Excellent work, as always. You never disappoint.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:29
Although Im not 17 yet. I thought that was really really good.

You got the emotion and passion right across for both the characters and the writing was perfect.

Good job, it very very beautiful and very romantic.
Sunday, 12 February 2006 03:46
And now to offer feedback on part 1 here!

I know, my order of feedback is mixed up, but I swear I read this one first earlier on today!

It's so amazing. I think it's great how you take a little bit of Simon's way of doing things and a little of Kaylee's, and combine them into something awesome like this! =)

Keep the fluff/smut coming!
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 14:30
Loved IT!!! After all...smut, rain, and Boros. Need anything more be said?
Friday, 17 February 2006 23:24
WOW! That's all my brain could come up with. sorry.....

Oh, and maybe cold shower like right now =)!

Awesome job!
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 11:48
ooh!!! it's raining!!! *runs outside* now where's that doctor...

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Sunday, 26 March 2006 06:44
See above man. Wow, just...just...wow. Does anybody on this ship shoot anyone anymore?
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 04:01
Mmmmm rain sex = very hawt. Nicely done.
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 14:16
This fic puts 'Gene Kelly' to shame. Singing in the Rain has a whole new definition now...

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