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To die trying

Thursday, February 9, 2006

What happens when Niska wants revenge? Four drabbles written for the several_ways community at Live Journal. First challenge: Several ways to die trying

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A continutation of the story arc beginning with Twelve days of Christmas.

Fight.

Jayne dropped his weapons. The bad guys had a gun pointed at his weak spot so he just gave in and down to the ground they went.

“Mr Niska” the ugliest one spoke into his communicator “we’ve got them.”

Jayne cursed as Kaylee looked at him in disbelief, brown eyes wide. He wanted her outta there.

They hadn’t searched her yet, she still had the pop gun he gave her hidden in her sock.

They’d already taken his guns but his knives were the closest weapons anyways, close to Kaylee’s feet, and she was near the alleyway exit. He signalled her silently with looks from his eyes and finger movements.

From the look in Kaylee’s eyes Jayne knew she wanted to argue with what he was askin’.

He frowned at her impatiently and her expression changed to one of unhappy acceptance as she slumped into a pretend faint.

The two captors holdin’ her arms bent forward, a third turned round to see what the fuss was about and Jayne took his chance. Lungin’ forward he grabbed for his knives as Kaylee pulled her gun and shot the men holdin’ her.

“Go” he yelled as he ducked behind a convenient crate.

“I’ll get the captain Jayne” Kaylee whirled and ran just like he wanted.

The Captain was out somewhere on the planet and Jayne doubted that he would arrive in time to help.

If Mal did come, good, but Jayne was set anyway on makin’ sure none of the bad guys followed Kaylee. He’d die first. If that was goin’ to happen, he figured that he may as well take as many of the wang bad ans with him as he could.

Didn’t much care what happened to him, so long as his family were safe.

Wang bad ans = bastards

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Finis

When he received the message from his underling, that one of his people had spotted Jayne Cobb, Adeline Niska could barely contain his pleasure. He immediately began to formulate his plan of revenge.

His hate for Malcolm Reynolds had grown so much that it had fur

Comments
Thursday, 09 February 2006 14:22
I love this story line. Have loved it since the 12 days of Christmas. More please.
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:58
Just lovely (despite the blood)!

"the unrelenting killing fury that was Jayne protecting his wife."

oh, yeah
Thursday, 09 February 2006 18:52
I like how they're all interconnected. Haven't read 12 days of christmas yet, but I will soon. Your story moves well. It doesn't jam up or drag. This is a huge compliment. :-)
Friday, 10 February 2006 00:56
Very enjoyable, I especially liked it that Jayne killed that evil and spiteful *tamade hundan* Niska. Just hope it was real painful. So happy Kaylee was okay and that the crew are back together again. Shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 10 February 2006 03:12
"He had earned for himself and his minions the unrelenting killing fury that was Jayne protecting his wife."

Unrelenting. Killing. Fury.
Jayne to a T.

I love the 12 Days 'Verse. I love that you continue to show up glimpses from it.
More would be good.
Faster would be better. ;P
Friday, 10 February 2006 03:13
Ahem. That 'up' was meant to be 'us'. Show US glimpses.
Stupid typos.
Monday, 20 February 2006 17:41
ohh...i'm in love...

"...fury and hate in blue eyes were the last things he saw as a knife buried itself hilt deep into his favourite stomach."
whoop!!! go jayne!!!!

b
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 23:36
wow...so this is a series? awesome.

*scrambles to read more*
Monday, 13 March 2006 22:57
I'm really enjoying the extension of the 12 days storyline. That was a pretty awesome story - and I would LOVE to see more. Keep it up!

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