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Over the Hills and Far Away - Ch 1

Thursday, February 9, 2006

Set after OIS. Much to Inara’s chagrin, Mal accepts a job offer that takes Serenity far away from New Melbourne and to an unremarkable moon called Three Hills. With Inara’s promise to leave looming over them like a shadow and the job on Three Hills becoming more potentially deadly at each turn, Mal and Inara begin to retreat into their memories while all the while trying to find out what’s going on in their present… assuming they survive to find out. Also, Simon turns to Book for help when with his latest attempt to woo Kaylee, Zoe takes River under her wing, and circumstances lead to and unlikely partnership between Jayne and…

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Over The Hills and Far Away

Ch 1

June 14, 2501. Sihnon. Apartment of Heron and Layla Serra.

Layla Serra was easy to pick out of a crowd. She has a certain air about her, a certain dignity that all the other women working in the factory lacked. It was more than the way she pulled her shoulders back and kept her back straight, more than way she kept her chin raised fifteen degrees at all times and never let her lips part unintentionally. Those were simply mannerisms she had picked up along the way. She was born glowing, radiating a light that only the soul can see, and as she grew older, that light only became brighter.

But it was doused in shadow. Living in Sihnon’s largest industrial city was not kind to anyone. Layla’s hands were coarse like a worker’s hands. Her eyes were rimmed with dark circles, her lips ornamented with lines of sadness. She was thirty-two years old, but she could have easily passed for forty, maybe older. She was sitting on the edge of her daughter’s bed, running her worn fingers through her daughter’s soft, dark curls (so much like hers once were before she cut her hair short), one stroke after another, after another.

“Mother.” The tone of Inara’s voice wasn’t threatening, wasn’t commanding, wasn’t whining, it wasn’t begging. It was barely anything – but it was something. For a moment, Layla hesitated. Already, Inara spoke like one of them. Already, there was so much of her mother in her.

“Did I ever tell you the story of how I met your father?” Layla asked gently.

“Yes. The two of you met while you were in school. You dropped out to marry him when you were seventeen,” Inara answered quickly. She pulled away, forcing Layla to pull away her fingers, and turned around to face her mother. “What’s the point of this?”

Layla’s features were a perfect mask. Her voice was a perfectly tuned note, soothing and but authoritative. Inara looked at her with analytic eyes. “Did I ever tell you what I was studying?”

Inara looked down a

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 05:04
I really enjoyed it.
Thanks, jmsjns32@yahoo.com
Thursday, 09 February 2006 06:31
I really liked it :) keep going
Thursday, 09 February 2006 07:48
Oh, lovely beginning! I'm eager to read more!
Thursday, 09 February 2006 10:15
this is going to be fun..
:D
Thursday, 09 February 2006 10:49
Really good intro! Looking forward to more.
Thursday, 09 February 2006 11:45
Good beginning, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I liked this line
“Hmm… tough choice…” Mal said, putting a finger on his chin as if in deep contemplation. “On one hand, I am getting a might tired of lil’ Kaylee calling me Captain Tight Pants.… On the other hand, Captain Daisy don’t sound no better…” That earned him a giggle. “I’ll pass. Besides, I earned that scar. Might as well keep it.”

Thursday, 09 February 2006 13:47
Very fine story but oh, I am not liking the sound of the Three Hills job. And as for Inara's reaction to the news I think Mal is going to get even more of a tongue lashing from Simon. Hope the poor man gets some sleep before all hells lets loose. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 09 February 2006 18:51
Really nice Mal/Inara. Can't wait to see where it goes!
2X2
Thursday, 09 February 2006 21:17
Very nice Inara, and Mal/Inara interaction... can't wait for more... please continue, and please hurry!
Sunday, 12 February 2006 13:16
Lovely beginning! Great job on the character voices and.. oh, delicious plot shaping up! Much anticipation!

"The real problem was, though, that before he had dropped the bomb they had been talking and it was just so..."

And doesn't that sum it up well? Like a curse. Sweet and forehead-slap-worthy.
Friday, 17 February 2006 13:04
A very nice opening to what will hopefully be a shiny 'long' series!

Seriously, it's a well written piece of fic with some great character interactions and an interesting new slant on Inara's past that's quite different from most other fanfic writers on this site.

Looking forward to the next instalment!

Taya
Monday, 20 February 2006 13:29
Oh, very, very good! Excellent writing and story...it feels real and it's compelling and fresh.

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