Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Dynamics of Relationships

Wednesday, February 8, 2006

This is pre firefly, Zoe's and Mal's relationship throughout the years. Also about the start of Zoe's and Wash's relationship. All inspired by "Out of Gas." So, if you haven't seen it, I wouldn't recommend you reading this.

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Mal swallowed the last drop of his drink and placed it on the bar.

“Jen said he had blonde hair and tattoo on his face.” He said as he turns around looking at Zoë, as usually she was casing the place.

She wasn’t much for drinking, clouded the mind. Zoë scanned the bar looking for their engineer to be.

“Yep, Jen said this guy was a real jen duh sh tyen tsai when it comes to enginenie stuff.”

Mal ordered another drink.

“Sir, if this guy is such a jen duh sh tyen tsai as Jen said then why did she throw him off her boat?”

“Don’t know, all Jen said is that they had difference of opinions.”

“Difference of opinions, Shiny.”

Zoë turned back facing the bar. They had been waiting for this genius for an hour. So, she decided to order herself a shot, anything to take her mind of her captain’s decent into lunacy. Mal scanned the bar once more. He looks at a table of four young men, clearly drunk. He sees them whisper to another and pointing to Zoë. Mal wonder which one of them was actually bold enough to actually come over. Mal had his sights on the big one.

“Go in Les, go talk to her!” said the smallest and clearly the drunkest.

The big one stood up quite purposefully, he straightens his clothes and walk over. “Be gentle Zoë, he’s nyen ching dud.” Mal whispered, as he sipped his drink.

The young men at the table were cheering them on. Les looked back at his friends pointing at Zoë’s bottom. His friends gave him the thumbs up in approval. Les look at Mal as to ask if Zoë was with him. Mal nodded no. He was dying of laughter in the inside. Mal saw the young man hand cock back into the air,

“Oh no, don’t do boy, for the love of tyen sho-doh don’t do it!” Mal said to himself.

Les swatted Zoë on her butt.

“Hey ba …”

Before the boy could finish his statement Zoë had him on the floor with her boot on his chest and gun pointed at his face.

Mal stood there laughing. Looking down at the boy.

“Now, son is that anyway to treat a lady? I think you should apologize to her?”

Les friends at

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 01:45
Loved it, especially the flashback when Mal first meets Zoe. Update soon!!!
Thursday, 09 February 2006 12:56
I liked this and it is great to have some pre-Firefly Mal and Zoe. Might be an idea to run it passed a beta before posting just to tidy it up a bit but nothing major. Just love the way you describe Zoe, you have her absolutely right! And Mal is pretty much how I imagine he would have been before the series. Nice also to see Monty. Look foward to the next part and well done! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 17 February 2006 18:06
“Yes, Kaylee and I planned a mutiny to throw you off ship, the pony is our new captain now.”

makes sense.

b

ps. just a pointer, you might want to do a spellcheck on any future posts because you have some basic grammatical and spelling errors.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 04:22
I loved this, but I agree you need to have some fresh eyes read over it for a spelling/grammar check. You have a great creative mind and I love the way you gave each one of the characters some back story that was believable and in line with the show. Good job, please continue!
Thursday, 23 February 2006 17:55
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah spelling and grammer are not my gifts. I was lucky in school that my teachers graded me by the content of my papers and not the technical stuff cause I probably still be in 9th grade english.
Kinda new to all this, what's beta and how do I run something through it.
:)

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