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Thinking things through part 8

Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Still circling

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“I ain’t gonna be popular.” Jayne broke the silence that had descended as they walked.

Kaylee shook her head “River fell in her ownself, ya didn’t do anythin’ wrong.”

The girl always did want to see the best side of things Jayne thought, didn’t know how she could with all they’d seen.

“Maybe not,” he shrugged. “But I’ll go take me a warm shower first before all the yellin’ starts.”

Kaylee unconsciously tightened her grip on River’s shoulders. She didn’t like the acceptance in Jayne’s voice, how he obviously expected to be treated. She was all set to call him on it but they had already reached Serenity, and she saw he was right.

Simon was hoverin’ in the cargo bay and caught sight of River straight off. “Mei mei what happened?” He glared at the mercenary “what did you do Jayne?” He started fussin’ round River, tryin’ to steer her into the infirmary.

Jayne glared at the doctor and turned away headin’ toward the crew’s bunks unfortunately meetin’ the Captain and Zoe comin’ down the passageway.

“Jayne, what the hell?” the Captain’s eyes went to River dressed in the mercenary’s coat. “Want to tell me what happened?”

“Nope, gonna go have a shower, then clean some fish for dinner.”

The Captain went to say something else, to stop Jayne and get some answers, when Kaylee put her hand on his arm. He glanced down to see his mechanic looking angrily at him.

“Ni men dou shi shagua, did anyone notice that Jayne’s wet and River’s dry?” Kaylee’s voice was as cross as anyone had ever heard it. “Did ya notice that he was blue from the cold and River ain’t cause she’s wearin’ his coat?” She looked at their faces “I guess not.”

“I wanted to commune with the fish, floating, peaceful.” River’s voice was dreamy as she interrupted.

“Oh River,” Simon sighed.

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Kaylee watched Jayne’s big hands as he skinned the fish for her. He was good at the little day to day things she thought. Might be a bit slow sometimes, real dense ‘bout noticin’ her advances, but he was sort

Comments
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 15:21
*giggles*

Oh Jayne. So angsty and sad. And Kaylee doesn't get it. *sniff*
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 15:55
*sigh*

How long is Jayne gonna keep stoppin' himself from reacting to Kaylee's advances?

And how long is Kaylee gonna keep on trying to catch Jayne's attention?

ANd how long are you gonna keep us hangin' on for them to finally realise that they're both crazy about each other?

You're teasin' us, aren't ya??!!
They WILL get together, won't they?
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 18:20
This keeps building and building until something just have to give! Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 00:32
*sigh*
such a sweet, slow tease
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 03:46
*shakes Jayne* Grrr! Wake up you frustrating lump of man-parts!!

Great stuff. Gotta feel sorry for Kaylee, though. She's just gonna have to do something drastic. I hope. ;P
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 04:24
Book as always I love your work, I wish you'd quite with the dancing around though- tensions are mounting.

Always well written and you perfectly sum up both Jayne and Kaylee

:D
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Sunday, 12 February 2006 09:35
You know I have been sitting here for the last 5 min and I can not come up with any one thing to sum up how I feel about this story of yours.

I LOVE the whole series,
BUT it frusterates the hell out of me 'cuz I want you to just get on with it alredy stop tip toeing around the topic and give us some action!!!!!,
HOWEVER I also want this to go on forever 'cuz their slow circle around each other is a most wonderful dance. You write soo well the story comes to life on the monitor as you read it.

Thursday, 16 February 2006 10:22
damn you wash!!! damn you to hades!!! at least until kaylee gets her jayne fix anyway...

b
Saturday, 15 July 2006 18:37
One of my favourite scenes in all fanfic that I've read is "She put her hands over his to still them, waited till he looked at her. “You count.”" Oh, God! A simple moment that I would love to see actually filmed or maybe drawn by mphillips. I keep coming back to this story because of the imagery you've created. Wonderful!

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