Choices - Part 11 A
Friday, February 3, 2006
The story continues... Zoe comes to the realization that nothing has happened by accident, the crew learns of Mal and Inara's kidnapping, and Inara comes face to face with her captor.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4313 RATING: 9.0 (PG) SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N Apologies for the length of time between posts. Between holidays, my brother's daughter being born, and running an event for 150+ people, life's been pretty hectic! But now I'm back, and I promise there won't be such a long break between the this and the next part(s). Hopefully you readers who have stuck with me will remember what happened in the last part after such a long break!
This part of a part is close to 2500 words... more to come as soon as I get it done. Thanks for reading!
Go back and read the Other Parts: Choices - Part 11A by 2x2 Voices. Whispers. Brushing the tip of his consciousness. Tickling hisses fading in and out. Urgency to the sound; worried him. He couldn’t, through the haze that was his mind, quite comprehend why. He struggled through the thick, smothering blankness that surrounded him; forced himself onward, upward, through the oppressive blanket and out into the glow of consciousness. And the voices. “Hurry up with that yoke! This’ll be a lot easier if he’s still out,” came a voice, suddenly clear and understandable. “I’m gettin' it,” answered another voice, punctuated by a h
some really nice language here, even if the subject matter's on the grim side. you have a lovely writing style--give us more!!!
-kaynara
You can't take the sky from me
so happy to see an update!
b
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