Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Thinking things through part 7

Monday, January 30, 2006

Kaylee and Jayne go fishing

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3240    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee glared at Jayne and he glared back. She sighed and picked up the net. She knew that holding a fishing pole one-handed would be hard, but she wanted to do it anyway, wanted to pull her weight. Jayne didn’t see it that way and was startin’ to get ornery so Kaylee gave in and settled for doin’ net duty. Since her main aim was getting Jayne off the ship for a break, she was goin’ to try real hard not to argue with him again.

“We ready to go yet?” Jayne demanded

“Simon’s just comin’ to give me a shot, and then we’re off.” She watched as the doctor and Wash approached.

“I hear you went dancing last night” Wash greeted Kaylee. “Did you have fun?”

Dancin’, Jayne knew what that meant; he’d watched from the sidelines a time or two.

Skirt swirlin’ round her thighs, body swayin’ to the tune, hair bouncin’, smile just ‘bout lightin’ up the room, lightly flirtin’, Kaylee drew men to her like a magnet.

Give the girl her due, she could keep them all at arms length and always seemed to know which one to pick for more fun. They’d go off together and she’d come back all bright and glowin’.

Hadn’t been dancin’ like that since the doc came on board, hadn’t been glowin’ either. Somethin’ else he could dislike Simon for. Girl like Kaylee needed more ‘n’ toys and hands to satisfy her, that’s why she’d needed to go out last night. But she hadn’t come back glowin’, just drunk.

Unless every fella in the bar was blind and deaf Jayne just couldn’t see how that could be. Like Mal said, no-one could resist Kaylee when she was flirtin’. How come none of ‘em had got to see the teddies? He leaned closer to hear what she said to Wash

“Didn’t go out with any of ‘em,” a shadow passed over her face. “But the dancin’ was shiny.”

Wash drifted over toward him as the doctor started to give Kaylee her shots. “Do you know what’s wrong there?” The man’s eyes were bright with concern. ‘Course he’d seen the dancin’ and the glowin’ a few times too.

“No.” Jayne shrugged. He aimed to find out though, if they ever got o

Comments
Monday, 30 January 2006 14:27
You're nothin' but a big ol' TEEEEAAAASE.

That's right, you heard me. Tease.

Now get 'em both nekkid! Go on!

I liked this, I liked it a lot.
Monday, 30 January 2006 14:39
It's spooky! I was just thinking when would you post the next chapter of this excellent story, and here it is, just waiting for me to read!!!!!

I'm loving it, bookaddict!

Your description for Kaylee watching Jayne as he got out out the water has left me hot & bothered! That's just why we like Jayne - his hot body - and of course his hi-larious dialogue!!!

Now, that last line....
He wasn’t goin’ to think of Kaylee like that, not now, not never, no way.....
How are you going to get Jayne to feel happy about being with her? He's already noticed her!!!!

I'm thinking....... Jayne seeing Kaylee in an equally enticing way (dressed up or in a state of undress / wetness....?) and a chance for Kaylee to tell Jayne (alone) how she feels about him, and how she's changed her feelings about Simon.

MMMmmmmmm! Can't wait for your next post!!!

ANONYMOUS
Monday, 30 January 2006 15:18
*giggles*

Those two! So much angst! I love it. Especially Rivers insight.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 30 January 2006 20:01
Ai ya! my brain is mush - the image of Jayne all wet...no way to recover!

Nice work. Can't wait for the next one where they finally get together (right?)...
Monday, 30 January 2006 20:18
"Jayne turned away slightly so Kaylee couldn’t see his all too male reaction to the hot look she’d just given him. She wouldn’t be thinkin’ he was safe if she saw that."

Keep writin' like this and my husband may not be safe when he comes home...

I agree with Jacqui that you're a tease, but teasin' can be fun, dong ma?

ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 04:05
love it write more
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 10:05
See? I just KNEW a soaked-to-the-skin Jayne would be worth it! Your description was perfection itself.
*wipes mouth as drooling ensues*

Oh, wait... Jayne's not gonna get sick from his little dip, is he? I can picture Kaylee using nursing duties as an excuse to further their relationship some. I know I would, but I'm devious that way. ;P
More please.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 16:50
get 'em nekkid! come on! nekkid! nekkid! nekkid!

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