Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Motivation Series 13: Wet (repost)

Sunday, January 29, 2006

I took wanmei's advice and deleted this fic, along with all the rude comments from that oh-so-lovely troll. Here it is again in all its NC-17 Simon/Kaylee glory. Anyone who was kind enough to comment before, of course I'd love it if you wanted to do so again. Anyone who doesn't like NC-17 (that means graphic sexual content), just don't read it. Simple, right?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4397    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee woke up on her own, gradually, which she thought was surprising, as soon as she was awake enough to be capable of thinking clearly. She was even more surprised when she rolled over and found that she was alone in the bed.

Lately, Simon had been waking up before her, and finding inventive ways of waking her up. Just the day before, she had awoken to find his fingers inside her and his tongue trailing up her inner thigh. She grinned to herself at the memory. Her prim, proper doctor had a wild streak that she found completely irresistable. He swore it was something that she brought out in him, which of course made it even better.

Wrapping the sheet around her naked body, she crept across the hall to his room. When she found it empty, she became a little concerned. But she didn't hear any running, shouting, or any of the other noises that usually indicated trouble. She did, however, hear footsteps approaching, and she quickly slipped back into her room, in case it was anyone other than Simon.

She had just sat down on the bed when the door slid open again and Simon peered in. "Good morning, beautiful."

"Mornin'." Kaylee replied, leaning back and smiling at him. "Where have you been?"

"I went for a walk." Simon explained. "We're going to be parked on this moon for a couple days, thought I'd do a little exploring. I thought about waking you up, but you looked so sweet, all curled up like that. And I figured you needed to sleep in a little."

Kaylee giggled. "I wonder why." She noticed that he had one hand behind his back. "What do you got there?"

"Not much, I just..." Simon held out a small bouquet of wildflowers.

"Not much?" Kaylee repeated. Her face lit up like he was offering her a bunch of orchids. "They're beautiful." Letting the sheet fall to the floor, she slid off the bed and walked over to the sink to put the flowers in a cup of water, then went right back to the bed, grabbing the front of Simon's shirt and pulling him with her. "Come here and let me thank you prop

Comments
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:45
First Post!
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:45
Great work hun, about time to get that skinny dipping idea you said you'd been working on. What's next? Got many plot bunnies all lined up?
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:48
Can't remember my exact previous post... I think it was along the lines of:

"More quality smut from Frellingblonde..."

Taya,

(Grrrr to trolls)
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:49
Sorry, I just got my Linux box running today so my inner geek is running rampant.

Glad writing still writing, and that the aforementioned troll hasn't dampened your spirits.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:51
ohh btw, forgot to ask when's ur next one?

looking forward to it
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:53
I like it. It is a great mix of the sexual tension they feel and the comic relief of having their clothes stolen from them. I also love the idea of River joining up with Jayne to play a trick on them.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 23:56
Awesome job, as always. I'm going to enjoy any fic in which Simon and Kaylee are together, but yours are always something special. I especially liked the practical joke angle at the end, this is the kind of joke that only very close friends or family would pull.

Keep up the good work, glad to see you didn't let the past get you down.
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:00
I still think this is excellent!

This is a great way for Simon and Kaylee to consummate their relationship, and it's very tastefully written. Perfectly in-character, too!

Wonderful job!

*stands guard in case of troll*
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:09
lol,
the perfect gentleman becoming a beast in bed, I'm thinking that's how it's usually gonna go down.
(especially if you've been living with the girl for a year and haven't done anything)
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:23
Very nice. Makes me think I should really get cracking on my shower!fic.
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:24
It IS always the quiet ones...

I need to find myself a Simon clone to corrupt.

Excellent story as always! I'm looking forward to reading more!

What's next?
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:29
Also, RAYNE. RAYNE rhymes with REYNNE, have you noticed? RAYNE is the word of the day, chickie.
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:40
Go Fia! LOL Nice ryhming scheme...

I loved it oce again! Ah, Kaylee/Simon smut, never a way to have a better day. :)

And the wait was worth it!
Monday, 30 January 2006 00:44
lol leiasky, i'll be your Simon ;)

lol
Monday, 30 January 2006 01:05
Again FB, all I can say is the only thing missing is Simon and Kaylee behind the couch!

Great Job!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 30 January 2006 01:14
Hahha beautiful. :D
I especially loved the little part you slipped in with "the fact that his sister had apparently seen him having sex again"
Just loved the 'again'. :D
And the rest...well...
^_^
Monday, 30 January 2006 01:17
Que bella!
Monday, 30 January 2006 01:22
Excellent....

1. Nakedness? Check.
2. Sexy waterfall setting? Check.
3. Mal, Inara, and Zoe getting an eyeful when they didn't want to? Check.
4. River and Jayne being obnoxious? Check.

Another good round of NC-17 (and refreshingly torll-free this time). Keep 'em coming!
Monday, 30 January 2006 02:12
Well, maybe next time, space. Thanks for re-reading and commenting, everyone.
Monday, 30 January 2006 02:20
That was, once again, brilliant. Thanks for the great read.
Monday, 30 January 2006 02:41
Careful frell - some folks just don't know what it means to "change the channel" so-to-speak. Seems to me those (i.e. trolls) that don't wanna just pass something like this by, but rather want to make an issue out of it, are the same types that would fit PERFECTLY into an Alliance run society/world. Thought that was 'xactly what the browncoats were fightin' against............give 'em hell darlin'!!!
WKNIGHT
Monday, 30 January 2006 04:20
Best fic ever, love your NC-17 Writing Style, bye the way Suranyi=Wknight email me soon. All my excessive love, Dan.
Monday, 30 January 2006 04:56
Once again, great to have another wonderful fic from FB! Keep 'em comin'! Both the stories and Simon/Kaylee!
Monday, 30 January 2006 05:48
Just wanted to say that I always blush whenever I read your fics!! Great Job and can't wait for your next post!!:D:D:D
XVMYSTERYVX
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 06:56
i partly saw what was happening on your first post and i do feel bad for you, so please don't stop, i greatly enjoyed/enjoy your work!! keep it up!! ^.^
JOY
Thursday, 02 February 2006 03:34
hot (and wet)! but a great ending! reminds me of high school :)
Saturday, 04 February 2006 02:07
excellent!

when is the next one.


Tuesday, 07 February 2006 20:45
WOW!!!!!!!!! Thats Nc-17 and then some. Love it a lot, thanks the fik! Cheers!
Saturday, 11 February 2006 16:41
i LOVE obnoxious jayne and river!!!! those two are just eeeeeeeevil!!!

b
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 02:15
Wow, this was a really well written story. And I laughed so hard from the moment when they realise their clothes are gone, right till the very end. I loved this story, it was real shiny.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 02:16
Just adding to my other Anon post. I'm Renni, btw. I forgot to put my name on the end.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 February 2006 18:20
OMG BTW i have read all of your stories and i have to say that this is getting close to being my favourite, u have a unique writing style which is great (Cause let's face it, if we were all the same the world would be a boring place) keep the stories coming i'll look forward to reading the next one
luv 'n' hugs

Flutterby
Saturday, 18 February 2006 03:06
i really don't know what to say. wonderful fic doesn't sound enough. thanks for writing or re-writing this.

it was.......hmmmm.....and very romantic.

Friday, 28 April 2006 02:00
that was ruttin' AWSOME!
Monday, 01 May 2006 18:19
Yay for planetside clearing with little ponds in them, keep up the good work.

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