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Verdict - Chapter Three

Friday, January 27, 2006

Mal and Jayne attempt to rescue Inara. And things don't go smooth. 'Cause they never go smooth. Mal/Inara.

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Verdict- Chapter Three

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“Captain, we’ve landed.”

For the second time that day, Mal met a grim-faced Zoe outside his bunk. What in the hell is it now….

“Zoe—”

“You know what you’re doing, Sir?”

“Sure,” Mal said easily, trying to duck past her. “Always know what I’m doing, don’t I?”

“I doubt that.”

Mal stopped. “Zoe, we’ve been together a long time, shared a few laughs—a few bullets—but I’m not certain I like this new attitude you’ve been parading about. This is my ship— my ship . Any of this jogging your memory?”

Zoe crossed her arms behind her back and raised her chin. “I’m sorry to hear that, Captain. It’s just that—when a woman loses her husband, it makes her a might twitchy about those she does have left in her life.”

Mal studied her for a moment. “I got a plan.”

“Do you?”

“Well, not a plan —plan… exactly. But it’s a damn good chance.”

“And that is?”

“It sort of hinges on my overwhelming desire to live. And Jayne’s greed.” Mal paused. “Mostly Jayne’s greed.”

“That’s bound to go well.”

“We’ve been in worse situations than this,” Mal said.

“I told you, Sir, I’m not up for losing another one of my crew.”

“Will you stop referring to it as your crew? My ship!”

“Yes, Sir.”

Zoe followed him to the shuttle. Jayne sat in the pilot’s seat, rifling through his pile of guns, strapping some onto his belt, and throwing others into the corner.

“Jun ta ma yao ming. Joo-ee. Be careful,” Zoe said. “Don’t do anything too stupid.”

Jayne rolled his eyes and flipped the switches on the dash. The shuttle shuddered to life. “You two gonna stand around yacking all day?”

Mal ignored him. “Look, Zoe… this ain’t the way…” he sighed and folded his arms over his chest. “It’s Inara.”

“I know. Were I you, I’d do the same.”

They regarded each other for a moment. Finally, Zoe backed out of the shuttle. Mal sighed and dropped into the seat next to Jayne.

“Can’t believe you’re giving away all our gorram money, Mal,” Jayne muttered.

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 27 January 2006 03:33
Fun-filled. Fast action. Inara would never say "balls."
2X2
Friday, 27 January 2006 04:07
great chapter! can't wait for more! poor Inara!!
Friday, 27 January 2006 07:35
Really superb but is it bad I keep wanting to shake some sense into Inara? Why didn't she just do as Mal said and let Jayne get her away while the Captain was distracting Niska with the money? If she hadn't struggled and kicked Jayne they would have made it to the safety of the shuttle instead of putting the whole gorram plan in jeopardy. But then this is more like life, people don't always react as you want them to do under stress. Mighty fine story, and boy do I want to see Niska blown away! I also loved Zoe in this. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
FUNKYINFISHNET
Friday, 27 January 2006 10:18
This chapter had me on the edge of my seat, seriously. So intense and taut, I hope Inara pulls through and allows herself to actually have something with Mal. Mal's reaction to her shooting was really moving and believable. Keep it up :- )
Friday, 27 January 2006 12:40
Really exciting chapter. Loved the interaction between all the characters.

ANONYMOUS
Friday, 27 January 2006 12:53
Oh my God he shot Inara.

And now I shall read the rest.

(It's Taya by the way... too lazy to sign in)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 01:14
three gorram words, Oh My GOD!! damn great writing, love this, 'cept the part 'bout 'Nara getting shot up, Niska may you burn forever in that special level of hell... GRRRRR *goes to throttal Niska himself* Damn great story, can't wait for more
Sunday, 12 February 2006 16:47
That was awesome! I agree that Inara would never says "balls", but other than that it was amazing!

*goes to read the next chapter*

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