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Virtual Firefly episode 1x19 (act two)

Thursday, January 26, 2006

“The Perfect Sunset” (act two): This is the fourth episode of the Virtual Firefly project. Check out our web site at stillflying.net!

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INT. SERENITY – INARA’S SHUTTLE – DAY

Inara sits in front of the CORTEX SCREEN that hangs on her wall like a mirror. The client portion is currently deactivated, and she highlights another section, bringing up the statement “No messages waiting.”

Behind her, Mal clears his throat.

She’s startled, and taps away the message, turning off the screen.

INARA

Captain, I didn’t hear you ask to come in.

MAL

(smiling)

You so rarely do.

Mal has a bottle of wine in each hand.

INARA

To what do I owe this intrusion?

MAL

Thought you were about, and figured I’d see if I could convince you to head outside. Not a day to be cooped up, you ask me.

She stands.

INARA

I was just checking to see if I’d received any new messages.

MAL

And have you?

She shakes her head and walks over to him, taking one of the bottles of wine and studying it.

MAL (cont’d)

From that caper we pulled for Li Shen a few months back. Got another bottle I was savin’ for dinner, but this is pretty much the last of it.

INARA

Ah, yes, the infamous, “I’ll pay you in real coin next time, I promise,” caper.

MAL

I see you’ve heard of my exploits.

She smiles, looks around the inside of the shuttle, hands the bottle back to Mal.

INARA

You know, I didn’t think I would, but when I’m gone, I’ll miss this.

Awkward beat. They both look away.

INARA (cont’d)

Shall we head outside?

INT. SERENITY – CARGO HOLD – DAY

In the background, Mal (with wine bottles) and Inara come down the stairs. They walk past Simon, who is at the edge of the open CARGO BAY DOORS, looking down at Kaylee. Kaylee is swimming directly beneath the doors, up to her neck in water.

KAYLEE

Come on in, Simon. The water’s so beautiful!

SIMON

I can’t…

KAYLEE

(teasing)

Your shoes are already off. That’s a big step!

By now, Mal and Inara are gone.

SIMON

I don’t have a suit.

KAYLEE

(coquettish)

Who says you need a suit?

SIMON

I—er, I mean—

Out of nowhere, Jayne ru

Comments
Thursday, 26 January 2006 11:04
The dynamics between characters are really well written in this part, I really liked how you split them off into little groups, each with something different happening! Your Wash made me laugh out loud, you've captured his voice well!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 13:08
Ooooh tension, and happines and so many emotions, and then the Alliance could find them.

This is exciting!
and I agree with burnandboli- your Wash is excellent
Thursday, 26 January 2006 17:43
Very fine. Strange how the seeming idyll is making me all kinds of nervous that something mean and bad is about to happen. As for Mal and Inara, it's as painfully awkward between them as it can get. Sigh. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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