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Virtual Firefly episode 1x22 (act four)

Wednesday, February 15, 2006

“Those Left Behind” (act four): This is the Season One finale of the Virtual Firefly project. This particular tale is adapted from the Dark Horse comic book miniseries. Check out our web site at stillflying.net!

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INT. ALLIANCE WRECK – BRIDGE – CONTINUOUS

Dobson’s MEN, a half-dozen in all, bristling with armament and anger, surround Mal, Zoe, and Jayne, who have their hands up.

JAYNE

Uh, Mal, didn’t you shoot this guy in the head—

DOBSON

No, you moron. This pound of metal grafted to my face, it’s purely cosmetic.

MAL

What is it you want, Dobson?

DOBSON

You. Dead.

Beat.

JAYNE

Gorrammit, Mal. Why’s everybody hate you so much?

INT. SERENITY – CARGO BAY – SAME TIME

Kaylee tries to crawl away from Blue Hand#1. Her nose begins to bleed. She realizes, touches her hand to it, looks at the blood, and panics.

Blue Hand#1 looms over her.

Blue Hand#1 is quite startled when Simon, armed with a meter-long FREE WEIGHT from the exercise bench, smashes it down on his hand and his rodlike device. The device shatters.

Before Blue Hand#1 can recover, Simon brings the weight up again, slamming the man in the face and knocking him back. Simon rushes him, hitting him twice more, and driving him back until he stumbles through the cargo bay doors.

Simon, in his rush to push Blue Hand#1 back, almost follows him, teetering for a beat on the edge. Then he recovers and looks across the room to Book.

The Shepherd has made it downstairs and rushes for the control panel, hitting the button that closes the cargo bay doors, cutting off Blue Hand#1.

Simon turns to Kaylee.

SIMON

Are you all right?

She nods, but looks as if she’s in shock. Then—

KAYLEE

SIMON!

Blue Hand#2 rushes him from a corner of the cargo bay.

INT. ALLIANCE WRECK – BRIDGE – SAME TIME

Dobson confronts Mal as they float among the decaying bodies. As he speaks, Dobson becomes increasingly intense and agitated.

DOBSON

You tried to kill me—You shot my freaking eye out—and dumped me to die. I might as well have. Law marked me as dead without so much as a search, and so I decided to stay that way. You made me a freak, and the only thing I’ve wanted since is to return the favor… An eye for an eye.

Comments
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 17:22
Excellent episode.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 18:59
This was awesome. Dare I ask for the post Serenity season?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 19:13
Head writer here: We'll keep going as long as there's a fan base, and as long as there's no official continuation of Firefly/Serenity.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 22:38
I just read these episodes from the begining and all I can say is wow.
Thursday, 16 February 2006 06:17
This answer so many questions for me. I've been missing part 3 of the comic forever... some reason, in this format, some or River's lines that didn't make much sense to me before, do.
Friday, 17 February 2006 01:09
I enjoyed this series. I like the script format. Look forward to season 2.
Friday, 17 February 2006 04:32
Awesome episode...can't wait for season 2
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 18:59
I have loved this series. The episodes are as good or even better than some I've watched. Please, please do a second season!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 February 2006 04:59
You guys are spectacular. Best fan fiction ever.
Thursday, 13 April 2006 21:28
absolutly great, but i have to ask where did you get the name of the plannet the companion training house is on? I've looked everywhere and can't find it. Is it cannon ?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 03:46
Name's not canon. I, um, made it up. Well, it IS canon for stillflying.net... :)

(Near as I can tell, the place has no name, but I thought it deserved one).

FYI, the first two episodes of Season Two are now up on http://www.stillflying.net (which also has a new look AND the long-anticipated forum!).
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 03:47
By the way, the above comment is from GWEK (head writer and writer for this episode... I forgot to login).

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