Episode 1x22:
“THOSE LEFT BEHIND”
Written by George Krubski
Based on a story by Joss Whedon and Brett Matthews
Edited by Lisa Garvin and Shawn Morris
Producer: David Elmer
Head Writer: George W. Krubski
Art Director: Sean Young
Disclaimer: The crew of the Serenity, the ‘Verse in which they live, and their fellow inhabitants are the property of Joss Whedon, Universal Studios, and/or Fox Television. They are used in this work of fan fiction with love and respect, but without permission.
EXT. WHITEFALL – DAY – ESTABLISHING
A ghost town, little more than a small complex of RAMSHACKLE BUILDINGS, sits in a field of dust and scrub.
EXT. WHITEFALL – EDGE OF TOWN – DAY
The two BLUE HANDS stand in the dust in front of one of the buildings. A BULLET hits the ground at their feet.
BLUE HAND#2
We appreciate the warning shot…
The Blue Hands look in the direction the shot came from.
BLUE HAND#2 (cont’d)
Agent Dobson.
LAWRENCE DOBSON stands on one of the buildings, looking down, a sniper rifle in his hands. He’s mangy and tattered, worse-for-the-wear, with a bulky, ugly CYBERNETIC DEVICE covering his right eye and part of his face.
DOBSON
Don’t. My depth perception’s not exactly what it used to be.
BLUE HAND#1
You invited us here.
DOBSON
Didn’t invite you to kill my men.
In the background, the SENTRY, injured by the Blue Hands at the end of the previous episode, coughs.
BLUE HAND#2
What exactly is it you want?
DOBSON
Same as you gentlemen.
(beat)
Serenity.
INT. WHITEFALL – WORKSHOP – DAY
The three-story workshop is a converted warehouse. A half-dozen FOLKS bustle about, mostly around THE TICK, a space vehicle slightly smaller than one of Serenity’s shuttles.
The Tick is all engine, with a small two-man cockpit grafted on. The roof of the cockpit is taken up by a bizarre-looking AIRLOCK/RAMMING DEVICE that looks like it would be used to force its way through another ship’s airlock.
The rest of the workshop i
This one was great! I got the comic just last week, and I love how you've adapted it. I'd read the comic about three times--yes, I know, I'm a little obsessed, but aren't we all?--but I was glued to your script, looking for the ways you adapted it and finding the little tid-bits that you added. I've liked 'em all, but this one was really great because, not only was it Joss's story, but you made it yours, too.
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