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Virtual Firefly episode 1x19 (act one)

Thursday, January 26, 2006

“The Perfect Sunset” (act one): This is the fourth episode of the Virtual Firefly project. Check out our web site at stillflying.net!

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INT. THE CAROUSEL – THE HUB – SAME TIME

The claxons sound and the crowd begins to panic.

MAL

(into his comm)

What’s going on?

WASH

(via the comm)

Um… You better get—

Any additional response is drowned out.

LOUDSPEAKER

ALLIANCE RAID!

Like a call-to-arms, the two words spur the crowd to action. Folks run in every direction, grabbing goods (sometimes even their own). In the midst of the chaos, Mal rushes forward, grabs Inara by the arm and pulls her toward the hover-mule. He helps her into the passenger seat, then looks at Jayne, indicating he should get in the back.

JAYNE

Come on, Mal!

KAYLEE (OS)

Captain!

Mal and Jayne stop arguing and turn to see Kaylee a few meters away, looking scared, being pushed away from them by the throng.

EXT. SPACE – THE CAROUSEL – SAME TIME

The exterior of the Carousel is almost as chaotic. The patrol boats block the outlaw ships trying to escape, while the gunships fire disabling shots at some of those still docked at the space station.

One of the troop transports has already docked with the Carousel, and two more are close behind.

INT. SERENITY – COCKPIT – SAME TIME

Wash taps the comm and looks up at Zoe, shaking his head.

ZOE

They’ll be here.

INT. THE CAROUSEL – THE HUB – SAME TIME

Mal takes a few steps toward Kaylee. Jayne hops off the hover-mule to follow.

MAL

Kaylee!

She gets knocked down by someone in the crowd. Folks are dropping goods, escaping on mules, horses, and the like. In the background, some of the slaves seem to have taken the opportunity to try to fight their way free.

KAYLEE

Captain! Jayne!

Jayne starts punching his way to Kaylee. A FIGHTING COCK rushes up to him and he jumps back.

JAYNE

Gorram chicken!

In the rush, Mal loses sight of Kaylee.

MAL

Kaylee!

Suddenly, Parker bursts out of the crowd, pulling a somewhat-battered Kaylee by the hand.

PARKER

Lose something, Mal?

He pushes Kaylee into Mal’s arms. Mal swings her around and puts

Comments
Thursday, 26 January 2006 10:58
Well written action! Very enjoyable! :D
Thursday, 26 January 2006 12:56
Methinks I detect trouble in paradise.
But I love this!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 17:23
Brilliant! Hey does the beach have nude bathing? Not looking like Chien is going to give up looking for Serenith any time soon. Shame about Parker. Great drama. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 26 January 2006 19:59
One of the things I've really enjoyed out of all of these fanfics is your ability to write dialogue for River that is completely in line with the show. You're also one of the better reads out there that incorporate all the aspects we came to love about the show--the violence, action, heroism, mystery, and glimpses of love between each of the members of the crew. Outstand job.
Friday, 27 January 2006 00:49
WASH

{Oh, sweet chubby Buddha, sometimes I love my life}, this might be my favorite moon ever!

That is the best line EVER!!!!

Great read! Keep it up!

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