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Whispers in Nightmares II- The Silent Pain Behind Those Eyes

Wednesday, January 11, 2006

A certain event with Kaylee has left things that needed to be patched between her and Jayne.

Jayne gets a shocker at Mal's new behavior.

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Title: Whispers in Nightmares II- The Silent Pain Behind Those Eyes

Author: YouCantStopTheSignal

Fandom: Firefly

Rating: PG-13 for language

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Firefly characters. Joss Whedon does. Thank him. I make no money from any of this.

Notes: I warn you now that this is not going to be a fanfic about the stupid mercenary named Jayne Cobb, who sometimes can’t even form a correct sentence.

This is set after “Objects in Space” but before “Serenity”.

There will be violence, language, etc. should the moment arise.

Yes, I know this part was short, but I will make up for it in the next one. Many, Many things are about to happen, so it will be quite a long chapter.

Would you like to talk more about the fanfic in a thread? Go here: Whispers In Nightmares: General Thread

Enjoy.

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Jayne grunted as he lifted the last crate into the small craft.

“Zoë. Jayne.” Mal nodded to each of them as he stepped into the main seat of the craft. The Captain ran his hand through his auburn out of habit as he checked the cargo. He mumbled to himself while pointing at certain containers, a hand resting on his chin every once in a while.

Meanwhile Jayne was curiously watching Kaylee. She was walking brusquely through the cargo room, a wrench in her hand. She would fling it violently around at times as if silently debating with herself. His muscular buttocks must have damaged Kaylee mentally worse than he thought. He chuckled to himself.

Mal had finally finished conducting the check. “Alright crew. We’ll be back in about

Comments
YOUCANTSTOPTHESIGNAL
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 21:59
I assure you, all the little details about Jayne's past, etc. has already been worked out; there are no kinks although it may seem like it.

As far as this being a Jayne/Kaylee romance, I'm not sure I'm going to go that far.
SHINYTALENT
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 22:52
this is shaping up to something big I can feel it. It's really good too
AMDOBELL
Thursday, 12 January 2006 00:39
Oooh, this is looking to be really good and I can't wait for the longer next chapter! Very excellent, well done. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 January 2006 03:06
OH man! What a place to leave it! Keep 'em coming.

Rinny
BOOKADDICT
Thursday, 12 January 2006 12:31
Good ending, now I need to read the next one!
BELLONA
Sunday, 15 January 2006 15:44
"His muscular buttocks must have damaged Kaylee mentally worse than he thought."
i wouldn't mind my mental being damaged...

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ENGINEANGEL
Sunday, 22 January 2006 20:52
WHAT?!!! what??!! oh did i mention ... what?!!! wow, well, this is confusing but intriguing, my guess is that there is someone behind jayne that mal was aiming at, but oooo. i got to go on to the next one.

LOL @ "His muscular buttocks must have damaged Kaylee mentally worse than he thought." Those MUST be Jayne's words :P

and what did i say bout you with your wonderful way with words? well, this line just shows it all: "The pain would always stay in his thoughts, circling like a brooding dark cloud ready to release its bitter tears." good job!

on to the next chapter! tally ho! :P
EngineAngel

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