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Friday, January 6, 2006

Jayne never uses River's name : A oneshot fiction

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3168    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“You never call me by name.”

She was standin’ there all spooky like, big brown eyes wide in her pale face.

Girl had been at it for the last week, followin’ him around, jumpin’ out at him. He ignored her, had plenty of practice at that.

“You never call me by name.” she repeated.

“Have so.” He growled

“Once.” She agreed, “In the bar at Beaumonde.”

“’N’ look how that turned out.” He complained. Ai ya he could still fell the pain in his balls and the humiliation of bein’ knocked out by a bitty girl.

She glared at him through her tangled hair. Gorram it, why didn’t the doc ever brush her hair? “There are 352 different ways of saying crazy in English and Chinese. You’ve utilised 150 different permutations.”

“Girl, crazy, moonbrain, all used, never my name.” She persisted “want to hear my name.”

“Well ya ain’t gonna.” He snarled. “Now go away and leave me alone.”

She gave him her kicked puppy look ‘n’ he almost felt sorry till he remembered what she were really like, a killer like him, better than him.

“I just wanted to hear you say my name.” her feet trailed away.

She weren’t goin’ to hear it. Cause if he started sayin’ her name that’d make her real. He didn’t need her to be real, too dangerous.

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“River. River.” The insistent voice was pulling her back.

She had difficulty opening her weighted eyes, finally jerking them open to see Zoë’s concerned face bending over her.

“Girl’s a gorram reader ‘n’ didn’t know she was goin’ to be shot.” That was Jayne’s angry and irritated voice.

“Didn’t hear” she whispered “was listening.”

“Listening.’ Zoë was perplexed. The girl wasn’t supposed to be with them, hadn’t been included in the plan.

The first they knew she was there was when they heard the shot. Whirling to confront the danger, they’d turned in time to see her fall. Shot twice, once in the back, once in the shoulder.

“For Jayne” River was fading “need to hear him say it.”

Zoë glanced at the mercenary beside her and was surprised to see

Comments
Friday, 06 January 2006 14:09
Awww! Bless!!

Jayne being so sweet to River......

Nothing more to add..... Just lovely.
Friday, 06 January 2006 14:46
The soft side of Jayne. Good job on the voices.
Friday, 06 January 2006 15:17
Oh excellent! Jayne refusing...until he just can't anymore. He's just a big gruff teddy bear.
Friday, 06 January 2006 17:16
Kind of an extreme way to get what she wanted. But hey, it worked! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 06 January 2006 18:49
This was cool,you do a great job at writing the sweet side of Jayne.Lovely littl fic :)
Friday, 06 January 2006 23:03
aww...i want a JayneTeddy!!!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 00:34
Love love love love it!

(And I can turn my head sideways and squint a whole lot so that it's very Rayne-shippy--IMHO: The beginning of something else...)

--bugchicklv
Saturday, 07 January 2006 05:38
Very sweet - I liked River keeping count of how many variations he had used, seems like something she would do
Saturday, 07 January 2006 13:07
It's amazing how the tiny little things get to him. He's got such a smooshy centre.
I want a JayneTeddy, too! ;P
Nice work.
Saturday, 07 January 2006 15:02
I love any and all Rayne, but the sweetness and simplicity of this really made me smile:)
What's in a name? a whole hell of a lot;)
Please grant us more!
CBY
Saturday, 07 January 2006 19:06
This has all a good one-shot story needs: It's perfectly in character, pointed, fast paced, plausible and plain fun to read.
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 01:27
A simple, beautiful read. Ya did good!
Sunday, 29 January 2006 22:42
It makes me wonder if you've counted all of the ways to say "crazy" in both languages to get that fact. *giggle*

Very well done!
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 23:41
*squee* that was adoreable!

...oh my...I'm back to some fun mental immages...
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 12:09
Ol' Jayne's a just a big softie... awww!

Loved this one to death!


Luc

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