Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Ships in the Night

Tuesday, January 27, 2004

Short and cheerful - for a change! For all you Mal/Inara and Simon/Kaylee shippers out there.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5249    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Firefly and these characters are the creation of Joss Whedon. I really miss them, Joss! I'd like my sky a little less empty.

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SHIPS IN THE NIGHT.

The moonlight falling on Serenity gives her an opalescent lustre and once again her beauty makes Mal catch his breath. “'S'my ship,” he tells Simon proudly.

“No,” Simon shakes his head, chasing an idea that's flitting through his brain. “'S'our ship now.”

Mal nods seriously as this profound thought. “You're right, Doc. 'S'our ship.” And he slaps Simon companionably between the shoulder blades making him stumble a little.

“She's beautiful,” Simon sighs. “Almost as beautiful as Kaylee...”

Mal snickers. “Still don't think you got the nerve...”

“I mos' certainly do have the nerve,” Simon declares, his speech only slightly slurred. “I will if you will, tha's our deal.”

But Mal's attention is back on his ship. “Look!” he cries as Serenity's cargo bay slowly opens. “I love it when she does that. 'S'like she's welcomin' me home with open arms!”

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Inside the cargo bay Zoe, Jayne and Book peer out anxiously into the night. Mal and Simon are late back from the meet. Very late.

“Well now, there's a sight you don't see every day,” Jayne remarks catching sight of the Captain and the Doctor, arms slung around each other's shoulders, making their way unsteadily towards the ship.

“Oh, my,” Book agrees. “Looks like they ran into problems.”

“Looks like they ran into a bar and stayed there,” Zoe says icily, as the pair stagger up the ramp, bleary-eyed and blinking under the cargo bay lights.

“Cap'n on deck!” Mal announces loudly, before falling flat on his face.

“That you are, Sir,” Zoe agrees, pulling him back to his feet. “You drunk, Sir?”

“Well, I'm no doctor, Zoe. But I think you might not be wrong there....” And he nuzzles his head into her shoulder, oblivious to the furious look she's giving him.

“That ain't good,” Jayne says. “Us stuck on this godforsaken rock, looking for work, with ou

Comments
KAYLEE19
Tuesday, 27 January 2004 17:59
Good Job, thanks for the Simon/Kaylee stuff.
Tuesday, 27 January 2004 19:01
Excellent dialogue, especially the "on deck". Fun story.
Tuesday, 27 January 2004 19:54
LMAO!!! That was fun. Thanks.
Wednesday, 28 January 2004 00:04
I thought this was great, highly amusing and I so enjoyed Mal and Simon being drunk and daring each other to reveal their true feelings for the ladies in their lives. Sigh. If only all dares could turn out so wonderfully. Thank you so much, Ali D :~)
Still grinning - 'hic'
Sunday, 21 March 2004 07:01
Very funny, and the drunken dialigue is great.
Sunday, 23 May 2004 07:19
You definitely capture each character well... especially Kaylee!
Thursday, 22 July 2004 17:32
I just found and read this one (it was one of the 'promo' ones at the top of the page). What an absolute delight! Mal and Simon sloppy drunk at the 'I love you man' phase.

LOL at: *“Cap'n on deck!” Mal announces loudly, before falling flat on his face.* and *“Bit late, ain't it, to be peddlin' your wares?” “Oh, just what I was hoping for. A visit from the funny, abusive drunk.*

Absolutely delightful.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 July 2004 19:52
I came for the Kaylee/Simon and stayed for the Zoe - I love her in this!
I also love the fact that Kaylee would BLATANTLY take advantage of Simon while he's drunK!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 01 August 2004 08:02
Great story! It's the first Firefly fic I ventured reading, and I am so glad it was such a good one! I am particularly pleased with the dialogue and the writing, it's all very nicely written and in character! Simon is so bashfully adorable, and Kaylee's dialogue is just perfect. Great job!

Devi
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 August 2004 07:46
Goodness abounded. But...what comes next? Ain't ya gonna take us there?

-Roving Eye
CHARLIESANGEL682
Monday, 10 January 2005 20:56
Oh, I enjoyed it immensely! And probably spelled immensely wrong, but that's how much I liked it, so gorram spelling or not, good job! More?
Sunday, 11 September 2005 18:29
Somehow the cameraderie between Mal and Simon has degenerated into bickering. They are sitting side by side on the exam table, squabbling.

i could just picture them sittin' there like two lil' boys play-fightin'...made me laugh real loud
Sunday, 23 October 2005 17:16
p.s. can i borrow the "cap'n on deck bit"? please? pretty pretty please?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 November 2005 06:11
LOL I loved it!! I came for Mal/Inara but it was ALL good! I loved Simon and Mal's little dare!
Saturday, 26 November 2005 16:52
OH GOOD STUFF! I love the idea of mal serviceing Inara or saying so to shut her up hehehe! and the bit of mal and the doc acting like boys! oh i love it all but those bit i love tons
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 14:17
I want to see what happens when they wake up.
Sequel!

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