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Make Me A Stone: Chapter 5: Chickens come home to roost.

Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Mal has to accept Badger's offer of a job. Meanwhile old enemies seek to take advantge.
Spoilers for the comics. Very light slash.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3712    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author: Kispexi2

WARNING - Spoiler for the comics. Light slash.

RATING - PG-13

Many thanks to the amazingly smart wedjateye for betaing.

Earlier chapters:

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5390'>Chapter One

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5940'>Chapter Two

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=6309'>Chapter Three

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=8273'>Chapter Four

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MAKE ME A STONE: Chapter 5

Chickens come home to roost.

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It comes out of nowhere - a blinding flash, sudden darkness and excruciating heat searing into her brain. River crumples to the infirmary floor.

She's never sure whether the images that fill her head are her own or someone else's. Particularly when they're so familiar. Whimpering, she curls into a tight ball and waits for the agony to pass.

They thought you were dead when they tossed you out into the desert but they were wrong. Some people cling to life, even when they shouldn't, when they couldn't. An old soldier should have known that.

They thought that the vultures would devour you, skin and flesh and bone, and they might have been right had the old woman not passed that way. Had her own hurt not been fresh too.

“My enemy's enemy is my friend,” River whispers to herself before the tantalizing glimpse of understanding is once again obscured by pain and confusion. Big, fat tears begin to roll down her cheeks.

“Hey now, little one - can't be that bad, surely?” a deep brown voice asks.

River's eyes fly open and fill with horror when she's realizes there's a man crouching beside her - and that he's that man - the one with the smug grin and two perfect blue eyes.

Tamade erzi de biaozi,” she spits, lashing out with her hands and feet when he tentatively reaches out to her. “Tried to kill me!”

“Whoa there!” Mal objects, recoiling fro

Comments
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 10:59
WOW! Wonderful, creepifying and beautifully tailored to fit in with the comic detail between the end of the series and the film. Missed you Kispexi2, you have been silent too long. What a brilliant return. Hope the next part is up soon. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 14:13
Cool, working in the comics, fun plan. Can't wait to see where you take it!

m4p
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 16:28
Wow (as usual). Beautifully visualized. The comics were way too short and this fleshes them out so nicely and ties them to the series better.
Saturday, 25 March 2006 04:57
Splendid!

I absolutely loved when Book hit Mal. Perfect. The whole deterioration of Mal and the crew is being done so well by you. The Simon/Mal/Inara triangle is great, as is the Simon/Kaylee relationship. The bits of foreshadowing (Wash happy to die in the pilot's seat) are beautifully creepifying. I love how River's primary communication trait is to tell them everything they need to know *except* the subject she's talking about!

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