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Make Me A Stone: Chapter 4. Some residual heat.

Monday, February 27, 2006

SPOILERS for the comics/BDM. Mal has to accept Badger's job offer. Not much else in his life is going right either.

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Series: Make me a stone

Title: Chapter Four: Some residual heat

Author: Kispexi2

Rating: PG-13

Warning: Slashfic (Mal/Simon)

Spoilers: for the Serenity comics and the BDM

Many thanks once again to wedjateye for her brilliant betaing and support. For steering me away from exposition. For noticing everything.

And because there's been such a long interval between this chapter and the last, if you want to go back, earlier chapters can be found here:

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5390'>Chapter One

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5940'>Chapter Two

Chapter'>http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=6309'>Chapter Three

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MAKE ME A STONE

Chapter Four: Some residual heat

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Simon's sore.

And it's not just his head and bruised limbs.

“Forgave Jayne,” River reminds him, tapping a finger on the counter top and listening intently to the sound it makes.

“I expected it from him.” The words are out before Simon can stop them. Out and hanging there. Reminding him that once again the real problem is his expectations. He should have paid more attention at the temple, taken the lessons about desire being the root of suffering to heart. Inara still practices the old religion, he's sure. Perhaps he should speak to her.

“Hey, Simon. How ya feeling today?” Kaylee enters the infirmary with a bright smile, but her eyes are concerned. “You sure you oughta be going back to your own bunk so soon?”

Simon can't help but smile back. Kaylee is soft and warm and safe. Not a mean bone in her body. Unlike some.

“I'm much better, thank you. Thanks to all the excellent nursing I've received.”

Kaylee dips her head, but Simon still catches the flush of pleasure stealing across her cheeks. “Aw. T'weren't nothin'. It's not like I could fix you.”

“You wanted to,” Simon replies warmly. “And I appreciate that.”

Kaylee's brows draw together. “You mustn't oughta l

Comments
Monday, 27 February 2006 16:53
Nice to see you writing again. And a good story, too. Looking forward to seeing how Dobson survived a head-shot, a swan-dive, and a desert trek.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 00:31
oh, the inara is so sad...i love it!

~kaynara
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 01:37
As usual, your take on the "behind the scenes" stuff between the boys is wonderful. Glad you are still at it.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 09:13
Thanks for the nice comments, everyone. Sorry it's been so long. I have every intention of completing this series - covering the comics, BDM and beyond. I'll try not to be quicker with posting the next chapter.
Friday, 10 March 2006 18:56
That rat Badger really needs someone to nail his sorry ass to the gorram wall. What a nasty piece of work. Had to laugh out loud at the only escape being through the sewage, and Mal and Simon - so close and yet so far away. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 25 March 2006 03:18
"...when his cognitive functions kick in."

Snarf! Ending the chapter on a good LOL moment!

*Finally* a chance to settle down and catch up on this wonderful story. This story made the comic book become more vivid and make more sense, along with the lovely connnects to the movie.

Loved the bit about Mal's life being full of crap, literally. And the way he's growing both more gloomy and more desperate is being very well developed--leads into the movie-Mal well. I liked the bit about Zoe reading Mal's mind but only half.

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