Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Choices - Part 10

Thursday, January 5, 2006

Riots, fights, chases, abductions, gunplay... lots of action in this one...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4925    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thursday, 05 January 2006 15:42
Absolutely brilliant but oh my, what a lot of gorram trouble for our trusty crew! Poor Captain, poor Mal, and poor poor Gabr'elle. Those *tamade hundan* deserve to be strung up by their crown jewels for all the trouble they're causing. Can't wait for the next gorram chapter. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 05 January 2006 15:43
Sorry, I meant to say poor Captain, poor Inara... see how upset you got me? Shiny shiny story. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 05 January 2006 16:19
Whatta load of trouble. Ai-yi-yi...At first it was Mal, then Inara and now Gabr'elle (who i like very much, excellent job with new minor char ;) ). Yikes yikes yikes...Ah! What the heck are our big damn heroes gonna do

*bites nail*
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 20:31
Ahhh poor Mal and Inara!!! And I'm actually a bit sad about Gabr'elle..I liked her! Cant wait for more!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 23:32
AIIIIIGH! You can't leave it like that! Need updates soon, because I'm captivated by this story!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 06 January 2006 00:53
AGH! NOoooo! INARA WAKE UP!.... this just got real bad! or in other words real good! ;) our poor heros we have so much fun when you write about them! please continue!
-OldSoul1987 (sorry i was to lazy to sign in)
Friday, 06 January 2006 21:01
it's revenge of the cabby!!!! i bet he masterminded the whole thing!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 14 January 2006 17:53
Revenge of the Cabby! LOL!

Please write more!!
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 21:42
Love your writing 2x2, Really hope you continue with this excellent story. Any word on when that might be?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 26 January 2006 15:51
This chapter had me so upset (but i guess that was the intention lol). Gorgeously written, I hope there's some more hope left at the end of this. I adore how you write Mal/Inara, keep it up :- )
Friday, 22 June 2007 07:39
Holy crap! You write action sequences so well... I must've read this in half a second I was so glued to it. Riveting.

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