Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Vera [part 1]

Tuesday, January 3, 2006

How Jayne got his gun and why he gave it that name!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3532    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Jayne was in his bunk, polishing Vera. It was going to be several days before they got to the next landfall and he needed something to do. He'd done physical workout - several times a day - completed his share of the chores and now there wasn't much of anything to do until supper time. He closed his eyes and his mouth drifted into a slow smile as he remembered...

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The planet Beltane. Red dust, cactus. A relatively small habitable landmass, about the size of Australia-that-was, set in a huge emerald sea sprinkled with coral atolls and two ice caps at the poles. Pretty in a starkly beautful way, with luxuriously painted deserts, a giant waterfall that made Niagara look like a trickle, fierce lightning storms. And one major settlement called Hine Moa. Jayne had gone there on the promise of gems in the desert and been caught red-handed, digging where it was taboo. He was pretty big by most guys' standards, but the two dark-skinned fellas who dragged him into town were bigger. Turned out they were descended from Maori warriors, way back. He caught muttered threats of punishment and wondered who the Mr Big was round here. Firm hands flung him in the dust.

Jayne saw shoes first. Black, suede, feminine,with a heel. His eyebrows flicked slightly, then rose even higher when he saw the black fishnet stockings. Especially as they were on a fine pair of pale female legs. Not that having women in charge was that unusual, he just hadn't expected it here. His gaze rose higher to a dark red bustle, black and dark red corset, very fine curves and the face, currently mostly in shadow. Right on the decolletage - and it was a lovely one, he had to tell himself - a sheriff's badge twinkled. He also heard the unmistakeable sound of several guns and rifles being cocked and stayed very still.

He tried for charm, "Ma'am?"

"Jayne Cobb?"

Jayne bit back a groan of lust. There was something in the crisp schoolmarm tones that went right from his ears to his libido. Her being built like a dream on legs didn't

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 17:12
This is a great beginning, written in a fine voice.
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 20:21
Shiny-ness!! I enjoy how you get into Jayne's head and watch the conflicting lusts (Woman vs. gun). Only to spice it up when he is actually drooling over an professional icon (sharpshooter) as well as a goddess to boot!
Something tells me Jayne will work his magic and get his hands on Vera (insert all permutations here).

Keep up the great work,

Keep flyin',

K
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 21:53
Mmm, I love the different stories that are coming out about why "Vera" is "Vera" I have my own personal theory o' course but this is turning out to be a brilliant piece, keep up the great work!
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 23:00
It's a beautifully constructed story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I think the characters and ideas you've created are fascinating, as well as your take on Jayne.
Friday, 06 January 2006 18:56
vera's one cool lady, i like her style.

b
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 22:54
very shiny. can't what to read pt 2.
Thursday, 31 August 2006 07:57
Oh, I am so glad you mentioned this...so far it has more than caught my attention. Have to retire to bed...work tomorrow but you can count on me reading more tomorrow. I love that you put in the Maori---love the Maori! Jayne, you caught so very well...and Vera seems more than a good match for him.
Monday, 09 October 2006 15:16
Hiya Vera. First off, I'm loving how you described Australia-that-was. Smiling at the beauty in words.

And Honey? You rock at humor and sex in combo. I'm lol-ing at Jayne's first glimpse of the sheriff and their first few sentences exchanged. "Jayne had a sudden, very vivid and completely unrepeatable vision of exactly how he'd like her to 'punish' him, involving handcuffs and a heap of whipped cream, but he kept that to himself." Oh yeah.

Am liking the bringing Jayne back to the present, and yeah, I'll just BET he was wanting to be polishing his other gun...""Are you going to be all day, polishin' that thing?" Mal's voice jerked him back from red dust memories to the steely metal interior of 'Serenity'."

Nice foreshadowing, "... back in the days before he'd met Marco."

Okay, lastly, LOVING Jayne being not quite sorry Vera's lover died, but said it anyhow, it being the "right thing to say." You do right good by our Boy, Vera. And I'm quite picky in whom I say that to.

Will read and feedback more of this gem of a story as soon as my load lets me get there. I hope it'll be soon 'cause this is too good to let lay. Thanks for a great read!

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