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Thinking things through

Thursday, December 29, 2005

Just a bit of Jaylee fluff...or it could be. Post Heart of Gold

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3537    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Haven’t had a good bit of trim in a while ‘n’ ya were real good girl.” Jayne complimented the girl standing beside him.

“Ain’t none of the women on your ship accommodatin?” Helen asked.

“Don’t much like to carry on with girl folk I gotta live with.” He grinned to himself. To tease ‘em he didn’t always give the girls that impression. “’Sides Zoë’s married and a stone killer, ‘Nara’s a companion who don’t service crew, River’s crazy and Kaylee..” he trailed off

“The mechanic, she’s real pretty. What ‘bout her?”

“She ain’t interested in me.” Jayne said this as an accepted fact. He wanted it to be that way. Kaylee and he were friends and he weren’t ‘bout to loose that, didn’t have that many real friends. “Anyway she’s all fong lah for the doc.”

Helen couldn’t believe that any woman wouldn’t be interested in him. He might be a bit rough, a bit slow brained but the man was so swai. He was good in bed, a fighter, protector, be a real keeper for the right girl.

The doctor was a complete contrast. He was good lookin’ alright, but so stiff and proper, hadn’t even looked at any of the girls when he came in.

She’d seen the girl when she came in, heard a couple of her wistful comments. If Kaylee weren’t lookin’ for companionship as well as sex, Helen didn’t know girls.

Helen liked to meddle, it was her hobby. She wanted to thank these people who’d come to help a bunch of whores. There wasn’t much she could offer really, exceptin’ for her meddlin’. So when they were clearin’ up and Kaylee was nearby she put her plan into action.

“So Helen how was the big guy?” that was Wendy always wantin’ to know every detail. “Any good?”

“Ai ya” she didn’t have to fake that sigh “big all over, beautiful muscles.”

“And?” prompted the girls.

“Good at sex, wo da ma. Gave real pleasure didn’t just take, ya know? All technique though, makes ya wonder what he’d be like with someone he cared ‘bout. I’d have him back any day, wouldn’t even ask him to pay.”

She watched Kaylee takin’ in what she heard, an ar

Comments
Thursday, 29 December 2005 15:21
*Grin*

I do so LOVE when you post. And... you know, I have always wondered at the end of that episode who finds Kaylee and Wash.

Damn straight Jayne's a good catch.

But one tiny thing... you got the lose/loose thing mixed up a few places.
Thursday, 29 December 2005 16:25
*sigh* <-- is not fake!

that was marvelous! i love it when little characters get more play than they did in the episodes. this one is a true treasure!
Thursday, 29 December 2005 22:54
My only nitpick here was that it was too short!!

Oh, but there has to be more. What became of them? Huh? Huh?

*puppy eyes*

Write more?
Friday, 30 December 2005 03:33
AH! Sweet! And sexy!
And now they're both thinking. Very well done!
Friday, 30 December 2005 03:37
See, I always wondered what was wrong with the women on Serenity, why they didn't notice that big hunk of man in their midst. The fact that none of them were interested in him astounds me.

Now Kaylee's interest is piqued, I wanna know if she's gonna do something about it.

*seconds Jacqui* Write more?
Saturday, 31 December 2005 19:04
GREAT Jayne/Kaylee fluff!!!The fluffiest!!

Thanks, bookaddict.

Jayne always puts a smile on my face.

Ditto to what CantonHeroine and Jacqui put ......... Are you going to continue this? Will Kaylee make her move? When & how?
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 19:31
"I always wondered what was wrong with the women on Serenity, why they didn't notice that big hunk of man in their midst"

maybe they're all blind?

b
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 01:36
I'm agreeing with cantonhoeroine and Bellona here: the girls on Serenity must be stir crazy not taking notice of a fine piece of man such as Jayne.

I really loved this tho, it was so well written.

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