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Twelve days of Christmas : part 12

Friday, December 23, 2005

On the twelfth day

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3095    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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On the twelfth day of Christmas my true love gave to me twelve drummers drumming

Kaylee glanced over at Jayne as he stood up; he was lookin’ so pale, so sick, she needed to get some help for him. Her eyes widened as she saw someone come out of the shadows lungin’ at Jayne, slashin’ him.

“Jayne” she screamed his name in fear as he fell.

Whirling, without thought she lifted the gun she was still carryin’, and for the second time in her life she shot someone. She’d shot a man and this time it hadn’t been an accident. But she didn’t care, didn’t care ‘bout nothin’ as she rushed forward.

Dimly Kaylee was aware of shoutin’ and gunfire. But it was all back ground noise as she frantically clutched at Jayne’s shoulder calling out his name when she saw the blue eyes closin’.

She heard footsteps and saw other hands reachin’ for Jayne and swung around ready to defend him. “Easy Kaylee” the captain cautiously took the gun from his mechanic “we gotta get Jayne to Serenity.”

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Mal was concerned for Jayne and worried about Kaylee.

His mechanic had shot a man dead. No accident this time, it had shook him to see the swiftness of her response to danger. It wasn’t like sweet, shiny Kaylee at all. She was in shock after seeing what happened to Jayne that was for sure.

Jayne had been bleedin’ all over the shuttle floor, the look on Zoë’s face telling him all he needed to know of the big man’s chances. It didn’t seem fair that Jayne had made it through the kidnapping and the hunt only to die when he and Kaylee were just about to be rescued.

Kaylee had not taken her eyes off Jayne since his had closed back on the gorram moon. She had sat in the shuttle watching every move that Zoë made to help him and was now hovering over him as he lay on the bed in the infirmary. Maybe she’d be better off someplace else.

“Kaylee let Inara take you to get cleaned up. Then the doc can examine you when he’s through fixing Jayne.”

“No. No, I ain’t leavin.” Her response was almost frantic

Comments
Friday, 23 December 2005 16:26
Okay, so we know what Kaylee got for Christmas, what about the rest of the crew? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 16:30
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Such sweetness. And well worth the wait!

Rinny (too tired to log in)
Friday, 23 December 2005 16:32
Awwwww!

So sweet!!!

Thanks, Bookaddict, for this very fluffy Jaylee early christmas pressie!

Have a merry one!!!

You deserve a christmas break from all this fanfic writing for us expectant browncoats!!
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:18
Awww! What a wonderfull satisfying conclusion to a really great story!

Hope you and ours are having a great Christmas!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:41
*sighs contentedly*

excellent!

happy tears
Friday, 23 December 2005 20:58
That was a great ending.

For a minute there, after Kaylee was singing, I thought perhaps that last bit was Jayne in a last hallucinogenic death throe - I would have been so *mad*.

But it wasn't and I'm very happy.

Thank you so much for writing these, they've been very enjoyable!
Saturday, 24 December 2005 10:30
Super shiny fantastic ending, well worth the twelve day wait. ;P

A continuation for New Year? *crosses fingers, hopes*
Saturday, 24 December 2005 20:52
you didn't dare. good.

*high-pitched happy whine-squeee*

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JOY
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 07:51
yay! so great! have no clue what the 12 Days of Christmas titles have to do with anything, but I'm guessing it's also the song she was humming. thoroughly enjoyed it, regardless of my being clueless.
Saturday, 07 January 2006 15:04
Oh my, I totally forgot to comment on this amazing series! I was so happy to wake up almost every morning to find a new installment...
Your writing is wonderful (how could one fail with such great inspiration?), and thank you for sharing it with us:)
I hope you'll share more!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 08:22
Just read the whole thing... start to finish.... gorram-shiny read!

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