On the eleventh day of Christmas my true love gave to me eleven pipers piping
Jayne stood watch while Kaylee worked on the conduit. He was standin’ concealed in the bushes while she was out in the open crouched by the fence. He didn’t like it. But it had to be done, they needed to get to the port and grab a ship. Once out of atmo and in the black they could send a wave to Serenity.
He knew the captain would be lookin’ for Kaylee, wouldn’t have given up yet. It was his job to get her to a spot where the captain could find her.
Before she started workin’ he’d done a bit of scoutin’ and been dismayed to find so many guards posted round the perimeter.
He was too big to be standin’ out in the open; although they was facin’ the other way, any of the guards alongside the fence perimeter might see him, open fire, alert security. Kaylee in contrast was hardly visible, layin flat on the ground to work, her brownish clothes givin’ her natural camouflage. But he worried ‘bout her, wanted to be with her, constantly.
Watchin’ her now he could see that she looked real tired, neither of them had slept much the previous night. Jayne was feeling too sick to sleep well and beside he couldn’t keep his eyes off Kaylee.
Kaylee would drift off then wake again shakin and upset. Dreamin’ again. He tried to keep her close, give her comfort. Kept checking she was there. He didn’t think he’d ever be able to let her out of his sight again. So he sat there and watched her sleep.
Now he was watchin’ her work and hopin’ that they’d be leavin’ this rock today.
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The captain had waved first thing this morning to tell them to be ready at a moments notice; he had a plan half-way worked out. So Wash was staving of boredom by walkin’ round the boat checking her readiness. He hoped that for once the plan would work, that Zoë and the others would be alright, and that Kaylee and Jayne would be rescued and they would all return to Serenity.
The boat was as ready as it could be, so he turned to h
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Don't leave it there!!!
And, well, I don't think I've ever loved Wash more than here, when he was telling Simon what's what.
As if you needed to throw in more tension. You've already got us hooked.
Looks like Simon will have a chance to help Jayne even though he knows Kaylee might have chosen Jayne over him.......
.......a chance for Simon to come out of this with a little dignity.....
....IF he allows Kaylee to be with the man she loves..........
I wonder if that will be the way this story ends...........
Thanks, bookaddict, for keeping us on tenterhooks until the very end!!! You have really written Kaylee, Jayne and Simon so well & the tension has been exquisite from the beginning right to the end (I hope!). Good job :) ;) :)
love Wash laying it all out for Simon
*sob, wrings hands* Poor injured inconscious Jayne. Hope Mal, Book, and Kaylee all gave that hun dan what for!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!
Oh man, do I love it. Jayne growing weaker and weaker and still doing what needs doing. Doesn't ever even enter his mind to give up.
Wash and Simon were excellent. River and Zoe too. Them working together was a thing of beauty.
Only one chapter left? That's not enough!
This was the best chapter yet! Shiny shiny and shiny!
Everyone was just spot on! I loved Wash telling Simon just how it is, and oh man, River & Zoe! Good work!
I couldn't even wait for lunchtime, I had to read early! :D
Very good. Loving the Zoe River one two. Loving matter of fact Wash. Loving everything especially you!
Make tomorrow come faster!
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