Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

That All Encompassing Sense Of Apathy

Thursday, December 22, 2005

After watching a man that tried to kidnap River die Simon struggles with apathy with a little help from River and Kaylee.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1664    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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That All Encompassing Sense Of Apathy

Spoilers- up to Objects in Space

Disclaimer- None of the characters are mine, nor is the ship (although I’d really like one, it looks so shiny). Simon also quotes two parts of the Hippocratic oath, taken from my encyclopedia.

Note- This is my first attempt at Firefly fanfic so please go easy on me. This has to be dedicated to Pocket Jericho, who so kindly introduced me to the world of Firefly. Hope you are feeling better.

This was written in memory of a dear family friend who recently passed away.

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Simon had always thought that the expression ‘heart in your throat’ was overly dramatic, after all a person’s heart was situated firmly in their chest and could only be moved by a surgical procedure and who would want to put their heart in their throat? It had all seemed very illogical to him, even from a young age. Right now, however, it was becoming abundantly clear what the expression meant.

Simon stared at the grimy man near the doors of the cargo bay. He was obviously a miner, it was the main occupation on this planet. A fine layer of black dust covered his face and hands while his clothes were a sickly gray. A large, satisfied grin spread across the man’s face, revealing crooked and broken, yellowed teeth. Simon’s gaze traveled down the man’s arm to focus on his hand. The miner’s fingernails were black, a complete contrast to the pale skin they flexed against. Simon swallowed hard as the man’s hand clenched about River’s delicate neck.

Simon held his arm out towards the miner. “You don’t have to do this. She’s just a girl. She’s never hurt anyone.”

The miner reached into his pocket and pulled out a small gun. “Oh, I ain’t got anything against the girl personally. But there’s a real purdy price on her head, yours too come to think of it. The Alliance want you two real bad.” The man held the gun to River’s skull. “I’m guessing you love your little sis, so if you don’t want her pretty little head blowed off I suggest you follow me out of this boat while

Comments
Thursday, 22 December 2005 13:00
awww. so cute on the whole River, Simon and even Kaylee playing that childhood game :) Adorable!
Thursday, 22 December 2005 18:23
I liked this, also loved Wash's dinosaurs doing their bit too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 24 December 2005 18:33
“You see this knife here? I call her Susan."

huh. *mal face* my mother's called susan...

“Gorram fugees. I didn’t even get me an ear,”
niska, mal, jayne...always with the ears...

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Sunday, 02 July 2006 04:10
Oh, that was just too cute. I just loved it. A couple of tiny nits.

"Simon stood at the bottom of the stairs, watching as Zoë, Jayne and Mal integrated the miner." ---I think the word you wanted was interrogated, since none of them were Buddists, I don't think they wanted the miner to be one with the 'verse. ;-)

"It would do for the Tam estate to be untidy, to look like a real home." ---I think you meant here that it "wouldn't do," not that it would.

On the whole, a very shiny fic, especially for a first fic. :)

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