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Twelve days of Christmas : part 10

Wednesday, December 21, 2005

On the tenth day

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On the tenth day of Christmas my true love gave to me ten lords a-leaping

The crew sat in the booth, silently watching the replay of the day before. They for sure had not recovered from seeing Kaylee manhandled as she had been, or from Jayne’s display of killing fury.

The violence against Kaylee had affected them all. Zoë and the shepherd had gone all tight-lipped. The captain could hear Wash swearing over the Cortex and feel Simon’s silence. River was standing poised for action looking, for once, like the dangerous weapon she was. He had grasped hold of the girl’s arm to contain her and perhaps himself had felt her relax slightly just before Jayne had cut loose with a machine gun.

When the man had opened fire like that, the captain thought that Jayne had finally snapped.

But no, the machine gun had systematically swept the area cutting down first the guards and then the watchers. It wasn’t till the machine gun was empty that anyone had seen him. Jayne had burst from the bushes on the hillside dropping the machine gun and grabbing another weapon shooting on the run at the men surrounding Kaylee. When he ran out of bullets, Jayne had drawn his knife and slashed his way through anyone who prevented him from getting to the mechanic who was doing her best to help him achieve his goal.

The whole time the little mechanic was in the hands of the hun dans she had fought and fought. Several times she had nearly given them the slip causing them to get more violent with her. But she had never given up. The moment Jayne started shooting Kaylee had dropped to the ground and started crawling away heading toward the open ground. She had dodged and ducked till she arrived at the very edge of the clearing at the same time as Jayne who kept firing the whole way. It was Kaylee who had bent down and collected weapons as they ran.

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They had run and run. Jayne had had to get them away from there, quick as possible. Other hunters could’ve heard the shots, be on them like fleas on a dog

Comments
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 15:48
The tension is killing us all!!

Finely crafted chapter. Now bring on the nest few!
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 15:49
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

And now that my morning is complete, I can go to work.

I do so love this. I love that Kaylee fought for herself. Had it not been Jayne there with her... Simon, or even Mal, I don't think she would have found the strength. I think Jayne inspires that in her.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 16:15
Love it !
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 18:11
Yay! A plan!

sad to say (or not too sad) this is the highlight of my work day
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 19:05
Excellent, Bookaddict!

This story keeps on making my day.

Roll on day 11!!!

How are Jayne & Kaylee going to get past the electric fence without being spotted?? When are the others going to find them? Will they find Jayne before that compound kills him? Are the two of them going to admit their feelings for each other?

Ahhhh!! The suspense is killing me!!!

Good writing, bookaddict! Can't wait to see how it ends!!!
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 21:12
Gorgeous!
Ah ha! I was right. They poisoned Jayne. The hwood dahns..They are going down and their whole filthy hunting game with them!

Uh. I mean, my, what lovely action. Perhaps I should sit here with my parasol and admire the show. :D
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 21:31
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!! The tension is killing me!

Those hun duns, their dirty tricks are gonna catch up with them! It's a good thing Jayne is so big and resistant to the tanqs.

I can't believe there are only 2 more days! :(
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 21:33
damn automatic log out. The above is me.
Thursday, 22 December 2005 11:44
Oh God! I can't take the pressure!
You gotta save 'em soon, there's only two days left!
Hurry the hell up, gorramit!
Friday, 23 December 2005 23:49
don't you dare kill jayne!!!! don't you ruttin' dare!!!!

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