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Twelve days of Christmas : part 9

Tuesday, December 20, 2005

On the ninth day

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On the ninth day of Christmas my true love gave to me nine ladies dancing

“Why hasn’t the prey slowed down?” demanded the man at the desk, his voice menacing.

“We shot him with the tranq, he went down straight away.” Nate protested, conveniently not mentioning how the big man had woken up too early.

“He should be slowed down by now then. Never takes more than a day. Instead he’s out there killing my valued customers. Two of those killed yesterday were Core folks, repeaters, worth lots of money to me. And the girl, your drawcard, where is she? Aside from the fight in the holding yard we’ve hardly seen her. People pay well to see pretty prey hunted.”

“We didn’t see him at all yesterday. Maybe there was some sort of delayed reaction or somethin’” Red could see that they were in trouble. It didn’t do to disappoint the man in charge that could result in death, their death. “We could go out ourselves, see what we can do,” he offered.

“Alright, I’ll have the shield lifted for long enough for you to fly to their last known location. You’ll take my men with you and report to me at all times. I’m warning you however, if you don’t rectify the situation, don’t come back.”

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Mal was listening to all the reports, tryin’ to absorb all the information.

“There’s a shield of some sort over the whole hunting ground. Means we can’t just fly in and rescue them.”

“Pity”

“The gates into the grounds are guarded electronically and physically, guards are tough too.”

“All the guests are confined to the landing area and the space around this facility.”

“I’ve been studying Jayne and Kaylee’s route” said the shepherd

“And found what?”

“They’re heading in this direction.”

“What’s that?” Mal was surprised

“They’re headed in this direction.” Repeated the shepherd “Perhaps in order to reach the boats, hijack one to get out of here.”

The captain hadn’t thought of that, didn’t know that Jayne would’ve. How would he even know which direction to go? Of course trackin

Comments
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 14:49
I can't tell you how much I love this. The whole concept, and how Jayne has risen to the occasion so perfectly.

*LOVES*
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 15:10
This is awesome!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 15:20
FAN-RUTTING-TASTIC!
Even tranqs can't keep the big man down. ;P

"Mal was beginning to realise that he didn’t really know what his mercenary was capable of."
None of them do, but they're about to find out, neh?
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 15:32
Jayne is one hardcore *hundan*. Flipping fantastic chapter!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 16:06
Brilliant as always, bookaddict!!

Have I told you lately how much I'm loving this fanfic??!!

It's so shiny!!!!

Jayne always knows just what to do, no matter how desperate the situation gets...

What a man!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 16:15
Love how Jayne wakes up and is so aware of his surroundings and the fact that Kaylee's not there. And he just goes right into action.

*permagrin* (a term I have not used in over a decade since I was in college)

people are starting to wonder why I look so gorram happy after "working" at my computer.

excellent series!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 19:11
This is just fantastic! I'm so excited to get to work every day to read the next installment!!

This is BETTER than Christmas!

Thanks, bookaddict!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 21:19
Bookaddict, you're my new Big Damn Hero!
This is fabu! Absolutely fabu. Am I right in figuring that they drugged Jayne somehow? Something to make him sick?
And now I'm on the edge of my seat until tomorrow!
GO JAYNE!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 22:21
Kaylee shot someone?!?

Game on, people.

Machine guns + angry Jayne + Kaylee in trouble = One kick ass fic.
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 00:43
Jayne to the rescue with a machine gun! Ha, I love this fic! And Kaylee shot one! This is my favorite chapter so far.

This rocks you rock! And now I'm gushing like a fangirl.

Ok I can't wait for tomorrow.
Friday, 23 December 2005 22:56
Someone was goin’ to die.
He closed his eyes for a moment to think, clear his mind, took a deep breath and opened fire with the machine gun.

that's our boy!!!! go jayne, go!!!

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