Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Choices - Part 9

Monday, December 19, 2005

Mal and Inara return to what’s left of The Chapel of Love.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4686    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Monday, 19 December 2005 17:36
premonition of doom? oh no!

ai, the set up, the set up...the drama! love it!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 December 2005 17:42
brillant cant wait for next part
Monday, 19 December 2005 19:20
Ooooh, so rutting good. Love this but wish it was miles longer... Can't wait to find out what happens next but be careful Mal, that slimey *wangba dan* is waiting to catch you out. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 December 2005 23:02
Aww so sad!! But so good!! Cannot wait for more!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 17:36
You did such a lovely job capturing all that devastation, the messy, dirty, defiled calm after the storm. Gab'relle was once again a delight, as was your Mal, Inara and Zoe. Each perfectly in character in their own way. Zoe hard, Inara soft, Mal somewhere inbetween, torn between those two sides of him.

And ooooh, the delicious manipulation!They're being played, reacting to every tug on the puppet string without even knowing. Excellent!! Most intriguing..
Friday, 23 December 2005 21:56
sorry if this is in any way a spoiler, but...
*chants* niska! niska! niska!
oh, wait...that sounds like i'm rooting for niska!!! no!!!! bad niska, bad!

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2X2
Friday, 23 December 2005 22:27
bwahahahaaaa

2X2
Friday, 23 December 2005 22:30
Thanks everyone, again, for all the shiny feedback... I'm workin' on part 10 right now, and at Ambodell's request, this one is going to be longer than the others, probably around 4,000 or 5,000 words this time, just cuz 10 is such a shiny number, and cuz that will put the length of this story so far up to 24,000 words, which just ruttin' boggles my mind!!
Anyway, just wanted to thank all of you for still reading this thing...

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