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Twelve day of Christmas : part 6

Saturday, December 17, 2005

On the sixth day

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On the sixth day of Christmas my true love gave to me six geese a-laying

Kaylee watched as Jayne slithered away through the grass. He’d only gone a little way and she’d already lost sight of him. As for hearing him, huh, the man moved so silently it amazed her.

Used to his more obvious presence when aboard Serenity Kaylee admired the professionalism Jayne was showin’ in his huntin’. Of course the captain wouldn’t have kept him around if he wasn’t good at his job. It puzzled her mightily why Mal didn’t praise Jayne up more for it, instead of critisin’ him all the time. It seemed to her that no-one on Serenity, includin’ her, appreciated Jayne like they should.

She was appreciatin’ him now. She knew the only reason she were still alive was cause of Jayne Cobb.

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Mal cursed roundly as the crate ran straight over his foot.

“Oh, sorry Mal” Wash was apologising all over the place “it just slipped out of my hands and it’s so heavy.”

“Perhaps I could help Captain” the shepherd’s voice was calming as usual. He felt his intervention would have more effect on the captain if the doctor hadn’t chosen that moment to appear and start complaining.

“Captain why is it that River and I have been allocated Christmas decoration duty? Should we be worrying about such things when Kaylee is missing?”

“Since we don’t have much else to do I thought you would welcome the opportunity to keep busy doctor.” The captain was trying to keep his temper. Anxiety always made him antsy, and now added to his worry ‘bout his missing crew was the worry of the up coming rescue.

They wouldn’t arrive at Trinity till the next day, and after arrival they still had to make a rescue plan. Jayne was good, but Mal was worried that his crew might not survive the wait.

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Jayne moved through the undergrowth stealthily. The man he was trackin’ weren’t far away now. He had scouted round till he’d found someone on his own. Fella was still at the campfire eatin’ breakfast.

Comments
Saturday, 17 December 2005 13:31
Oh, god, yes.

They can keep moving. And you can keep writing.

I'm so insanely happy that both Jayne and Kaylee are using their wits to survive.
Saturday, 17 December 2005 13:57
The only bad thing about this series is that you're making me wait for it!

Seriously, I love this. Personal issuse mixed up with we're-being hunted issues. Jayne all manly and professional and protective. Kaylee takin care of Jyane and driving him nuts all unaware.

Can tomorrow come faster?

Oh and I gotta know what clothes Mal is objecting to.
Saturday, 17 December 2005 14:37
Keep going, Bookaddict!!

They make a great team, and I love the tension between the two of them.

I wonder if you'll give them time to act on their feelings??!!........

I know you'll keep us hanging on until Xmas Day!
Saturday, 17 December 2005 15:13
Oooh! I love Hunting!Jayne, now complete with Slithering!Action - I want one for Christmas.
'Course, I'll probably need a real big stocking...
;P
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 17 December 2005 17:00
Damn, this is good! Having a hard time finding things to occupy my time before the next episode!

Can't even imagine how the 12th day will be!
Saturday, 17 December 2005 17:09
I loveJayne's professionalism. He's all stealthy and what not. Kind of crushin' on him right now. Also, I can't wait to find out what Mal find's so objectable about the clothes. I mean the man's worn a dress for a job, so this must be some uh....interesting stuff, lol. Shiny job!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 17 December 2005 19:11
Ooh, this is good...I want a Huntin' Slitherin' Jayne action figure too...
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 17 December 2005 20:50
SQUEEEEEEEE!!

Oh, I love it. Jayne is just fan-freaking-tastic here! Don't underestimate a Cobb, seems to be the lesson here. Even if Mal and the rest weren't coming, Jayne could probably get them out of this!

-Rin
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 17 December 2005 22:11
This is Jayne at his best, in his element. I love how everyone (the crew) now appreciates what seems to be so obvious to the rest of us!
Sunday, 18 December 2005 01:38
YAY!!!!!!!!!
I am loving this! Seriously. You've put our loved ones in a dangerous situation, all right, but I'm guessing that they'll come through just fine.

At least, they'd better or you're in a heap of trouble when Mal finds out!
Sunday, 18 December 2005 10:17
I am mighty curious about what costumes Inara will have them wearing and also mighty impressed with Jayne. Keep going, this is great! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 18 December 2005 17:29
*hauls out a big-ass stocking* dear santa...

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