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Twelve days of Christmas : Part 3

Wednesday, December 14, 2005

On the third day

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2888    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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On the third day of Christmas my true love gave to me three french hens

Mal was tired. He, Book and Zoë spent all yesterday afternoon tramping round town trying to locate his missing crew members. They’d investigated abandoned buildings, searched every alley in the place, visited all the bars and talked to all the lowlifes trying to get a line on Jayne and Kaylee. They’d came up wanting.

He’d come to the conclusion that the mechanic and mercenary were no longer on the planet. They were out in the black somewhere on a ship. So first they had to locate the right ship. Naturally this planet had to be a popular port with ships landing and leaving atmo almost constantly.

So he sent Wash to the Port captain to get a list of all those ships which had taken off in the last day. Of course even if they got the list, they had no way of knowing which one held the culprits and his crew. Book and Zoe had gone to talk to the sheriff and see if they could find out about any other undesirables around.

There was also the matter of why would anyone snatch Jayne or Kaylee? Jayne probably had a list of enemies as long as his arm. But wouldn’t they just kill him? There’d be no point in kidnapping. And of course no-one could hate Kaylee. A worse thought, and one he was avoiding, was that his people were snatched because of some crime they’d all done.

Speculating wasn’t helping, to keep himself busy he started going through all the stuff they hauled from the alley yesterday.

All Jayne’s going to town weapons were there, guns, knives, brass knuckles, emergency grenade. The list he’d given Jayne was there too, all crumpled up from too much handling, each item painstakingly marked off. The big man had been trying gorram hard to make up for what he’d done at Ariel.

Mixed up with all the boring purchases and parts for Serenity were Kaylee’s Christmas things. The jumble of bright packages, bags and boxes didn’t mean much to him. He had no idea what to do with them. But Kaylee had her heart set on a celebration. So when

Comments
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 13:43
Oh, geeez.

That does not sound good at all.

This is just teasing, you know it, don't you? You're doing this to keep us all strung out, aren't you?

And damn if it ain't working. Keep 'em coming.
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 14:29
Now, this is a fine mess you've gotten them into...
Can't wait to see how you get them out.

I loved the passing mention of the 'emergency grenade' among Jayne's belongings. Fantastic subtle shout to the BDM!

("Boy, sure would be nice if we had some grenades, dont'cha think?");P
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 14:58
Oh my.

Even with all the bad... this is still like the best lead up to Christmas ever!!!
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 15:06
*gasp*

OMG!!!

Wait! It's just fanfiction!!! OMG, I was getting myself worked up over this fine piece of work!
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 21:17
Geez, you've gotten our crew into a serious x-mas caper. I can't wait to read more!
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 21:33
Ask and ye shall recieve!
You posted while I was reading, you sneaky thing!

Oh...... come on Mal, Figure it out!
Thursday, 15 December 2005 01:34
I can't wait for the lowlifes that snatched Jayne and Kaylee to get their come uppance! And no present from Santa either... Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 17 December 2005 22:00
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!! nononononononononono!!!!!! don't you dare kill our lovely pair!!!

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