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Choices - Part 8 A

Thursday, December 8, 2005

Mal is otherwise indesposed when trouble comes knocking on Serenity's door..

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A/N A shorter bit for the first half of part 8... looks like we may be taking a turn more serious as part 8 progresses... part b will be up as soon as I get it writ... many thanks to all of you who are still readin', and keepin' me inspired!

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Choices - Part 8 A

by 2x2

Kaylee dashed up the stairs, her shoes clanking on the metal, and hurried into the cockpit where Zoe and Wash waited. “Cap’n ain’t in his bunk,” she said, looking worried.

Zhòu mà,” swore Zoe.

“Do we know he came back last night?” asked Simon, trailing in after Kaylee , regarding the monitors in concern.

“Serenity says someone came home around eleven last night,” said Wash. “Everyone but Inara and the Captain were on board by then.”

“I’d still like to know why he left the ship in the first place,” grumbled Zoe, an edge of annoyance in her voice to hide her concern.

“Maybe ‘Nara knows?” suggested Kaylee. Zoe nodded, considering.

“Could be,” agreed Zoe if somewhat skeptically. “I’ll speak to her. Kaylee, go round up Jayne, tell him to be ready for trouble. Simon, I’d be right appreciative if you’d find the Shepherd as well.”

“Right,” said Kaylee, echoed by an “Of course,” from Simon, and the two hurried down out of the cockpit.

“Meanwhile, what do I say to our distinguished visitors?” asked Wash, indicating the four men visible on the vid screen.

“Stall ‘em,” said Zoe, just as he knew she would.

“…Right,” Wash groused under h

Comments
Thursday, 08 December 2005 09:31
This was wonderful, I absolutely adored Mal and Inara together and how typical of Zoe to interrupt just at that moment! But oh, I don't have a good feeling about those four law officers wanting to speak to the Captain. This is just terrific, can't wait to see what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 13:48
AHhh I loved it!!! The Mal/Inara part was AWESOME!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 13:49
Got excited all over again when i saw that you posted this ;).

love the interruption at the beginning and the Kaylee-excitement. Very fun and a great continuation!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 13:51
whoops, that was me!


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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 14:07
Heh, wacky fun!
Thursday, 08 December 2005 15:02
Adorable! What a way for the crew to find out... Very matter of fact, hehehehe!

Now what do those two local policemen want... Hmm!

Looking forward to more!!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 17:09
Loved it - Murphy's Law that Zoe would interupt!
Want to know what those people are after - please update soon!
Thursday, 08 December 2005 18:04
“Hello! Now that is definitely not a client. Wo de ma, what exactly do you think he was doing when--”
hee!!! *laughs so hard she falls off her chair*

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 00:23
The Mal/Inara part was great, but I think my favorite part was Kaylee's reaction when she finds out. Spot on! :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 03:00
Love the Wash lines, love the Mal/Inara, and poor Inara!--that's gotta suck.

Write more!
-Kaynara
WINTERHART
Monday, 13 February 2006 04:29
Wow - I officially need more of this *now*! I just read everything, straight through, in about half an hour. This is too good! You've a wonderful feel for the characters, and for what the readers need to hear :)

Slight edit: just checked your profile and despite what the alphabetical list says, there's more of this already. YAY! Thank you ^^
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 23:16
I was at work and I had to hold my hand over my mouth so I would bust out. That was superb fun. The interrupting and Wash, then Kaylee. Hee Hee.
On another note, Zoe and Mal, saying how she was happy for him and him saying he was happy. But all cool like and in character. AWWWWWW!!!!
McK

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