Choices - Part 6
Thursday, December 1, 2005
Mal and Inara, at last...
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 5943 RATING: 9.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N Dear God in heaven, I can't believe how late I've stayed up to finish this... I've spent the last 4 and a half hours writing, and I have to be up for work in... huh, 4 and a half hours.... BUT, I've finished the next part for you. I think you'll be happy for the most part... Lord I'm tired :o)
Go back and read the Other Parts: Choices - Part 6 by 2x2 Inara drew in a shuddering breath as she watched Mal’s eyes change from his normal blue to a deeper colour, his pupils large and dark, tension and anticipation flaring to life between them so strongly she felt almost dizzy with want as she finally, at last, loosened her control on all the feelings she held for this man, letting them wash over her in a wave of emotion that left her breathless. Oh, how she loved him… He stepped toward her and she took an answering step toward him, the distance between them shrinking until they were so close they were barely an inch apart. Their eyes locked, both of them acknowledging the weight of what was happening, accepting it and the inevitable consequences they would have to face after. And then he was leaning down and she was stretching up toward him, her hands sliding up his chest to curl around his neck, his fingers threading through her hair… and their lips finally, finally, touching, eyes falling shut, mouths opening, breaths mingling… She drew a deep breath through her nose as he pulled her into his arms, reveling in the scent that enveloped her. This was the smell of the coat amplified a thousand fold. This was pure Mal. This was more than anything she’d ever experienced. They groane
so wonderful....
I love Mal and your Mal is great
Well done
Keep it up. This is some of the best Mal/Inara I've read
Its 4 1/2 hrs well spent I'd say!
“Conjure there are worse ways to go”
Yep, I'd agree with Mal there ;)I mean, toss this up between this and Niska torture...yep, this is the better way for Mal to go ;)
Fantastico!
You can't take the sky from me
I plan to continue on, I have more places to go with this story, but part 7 will likely be a little longer in coming, as I need to gear things down a bit... after last night, I woke up sicker'n a dog this morning :o) oh well, it was worth it... though, I feel I may have rushed this part a bit... there are so many images in my mind (nice images) that I wanted to get in, but that just didn't fit with the flow... oh well, they can always do it again, I suppose... ;o)
mmm, the COULD, couldn't they...*wiggles eyebrows*
b
OH and the Mal/Inara dialogue. Spot on. Keep it up.
McK
That was... just... incredible. I'm so glad that happened.
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