Choices - Part 5
Wednesday, November 30, 2005
Cha and Confessions...
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 5142 RATING: 9.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N Part 5 at last... had a bit of trouble getting this one out... all they wanted to do was fight and fight and fight, but I negotiated, and things went a little more smooth... Part 6, what most have been waiting for, coming soon....
Go back and read the Other Parts: Choices - Part 5 by 2x2 They climbed the stairs to her shuttle silently, neither willing to break the silence, only the metallic clanking of their feet on steel echoed through the hold. Too soon and not soon enough they arrived at the hatch to Inara’s shuttle. She turned at last, gathering his coat in her arms and holding it out for him. “Thank-you,” she said, feeling awkward under his sad gaze. He took the coat silently, somehow knowing that if he didn’t do something soon, she’d be gone and he’d never have the chance again. But he had no idea what he could do. She turned, and then stopped, looking back at him. “You should drink some Cha,” she said softly. “It will settle your stomach.” “’Knew there was somethin’ I was supposed to put on the list,” he said with a wry grin. Inara rolled her eyes, feeling a smile tug at the corner of her own lips. She sighed in mock disapproval. “I have some I can--” lend you, she was about to say, but he interrupted before she could finish. “That’d be shiny,” he said ingenuously and stepped past her into her shuttle before she could say anything else. Inara opened her mouth to protest, but she could think of no polite way to do so. Sighing she followed him in, shutting the hatch behind her. He tossed his jacket over one end of the couch, sitting back on the red cushions, lounging comfortably and Inara wondered what the hell she was think
So...amazing. Thank god Mal is actually getting some nerve that isnt induced by alcohol ;)
Oh, no turning back! No turning back!! don;t you dare turn back!!
syzg
Thankful he didn't!
Thank you soooo much!! I was having one of those bouts of "ah, this story is no good, what am I doin'?" moments, and hearing that all of you like it so much really picks me up...
Part 6 is coming soon, I'm so excited!!!!
Honestly, this is just great. I think you've really got them down, and you have a great writing style.
::runs off to find everything you've ever written since 4th grade::
*banging noises* QUIET IN THERE!!! *kicks cupboard door*
b
You can't take the sky from me
Thank you all from the bottom of my little writing heart!
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