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Journey Home: Chapter One

Saturday, November 26, 2005

Gabriel Tam decides to make the trek to find his wayward children, and finds more than he bargined for.

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Sorry for the long time. This chapter has actually been sitting in my notebook for months. Hope it doesn't disappoint.

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Ariel was gray. He noticed that immediately. Steel and glass towers, concrete fountains and roads, even the sky, though the sun was shinning, looked like it was about to storm. On Ariel even the worst parts of it were clean and gray, and Gabriel found he did fit, even in his new old clothes and less than perfect hair.

At first, he had been relieved when Anna had said the first visit would be to the last planet his children had been spotted. Everything he had learned about living outside the Core over the last few weeks and he still was not sure he could pull it off. Ariel was not a border world so he understood the behavior better, but he would still have to be someone else.

Anna had been careful to the point of paranoia. He would leave under an assumed name and await her in a certain spot, while she got rid of anybody tailing them. She used backdoors and tricks to hide who they were becoming. Tricks, Gabriel didn’t think the Alliance knew was possible. He had almost made the point that she was being a bit jumpy, then he remembered what they were attempting to do.

She had told him to filter money from his account without drawing too much attention, do it bit by bit. Then she showed him how to open an interplanetary account under an assumed name, several, under several different names actually, and told him to always carry a small amount in cash. Credit was useless in the circles they were likely to make. Be casual and listen to the folks around you, trying to pick up their way of talking. Most folks will still recognize you as an outsider, but don’t let them figure you for who you really are. Don’t flash money, or your weight around; don’t expect anyone to do anything out of the kindness of their hearts. Keep and eye on your pocket. Anna had then proceeded to show him a few pickpocket techniques to “give him an idea of why”. Though Gabriel

Comments
Saturday, 26 November 2005 22:10
Very interesting. I can't wait to read more :)
Saturday, 26 November 2005 22:10
Very interesting. I can't wait to read more :)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 November 2005 23:20
Oooh, I'm really fascinated. Excited to see the next part-you've done a good job so far drawing me in with your original character, Anna, and your characterization of Gabriel. I can't wait to see what happens when they do run across Simon and River...:D
Sunday, 27 November 2005 00:37
Been waiting a long time for this series to start. You certainly don't dissapoint. Keep it coming.
Sunday, 27 November 2005 01:36
I found it amusing imagining Gabriel Tam going undercover to search for his children but heartwarming that he would try and what a stroke of luck to find himself on Monty's ship. Wonder how Simon and River will react when he turns up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 27 November 2005 04:36
Great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Gabriel is in for a shock when he meets his kids again. The meeting will be interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Sunday, 27 November 2005 10:12
I have only two things to say.
MORE PLEASE!
Sunday, 27 November 2005 12:58
Please write more, quickly.
Sunday, 27 November 2005 15:56
tracey and the mustache!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 28 November 2005 04:38
Gates was a clean slate. Gates would be a good honorable man who never betrayed his family.

I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw this posted, as I only just read the first installment three days ago (after reading reginaroadie's recommendation). I couldn't believe it! Three days ago, I was bemoaning how it could just stop there, and today I find a sequel! Giddy is the word!
An angst filled tale of Gabriel Tam searching for the children he lost, through his own failings. There just has to be a story showing what happens when he finds them.
I like how Ariel is gray, but even the worst parts were clean. Gabriel, trying so hard to be someone different, still feels as if he belongs on this Core planet, even in his new old clothes.
It's great seeing Monty again, and it was hysterical that he hasn't been able to grow his beard back. And what is Thomas' story.
I'll be anxiously looking forward to the next installment.



MOVIEBOY
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 06:23
hey this is so great. i can not wait for the next part. i wish u the best of luck writing and i hope u have time cuz it looks like u have fans. no power in the verse can stop u

a dear fan,
Cursed Honor
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 12:49
Yay for bringing Monty in on this, can't wait to read more.

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