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Monday, March 7, 2005

Gabriel Tam decides to make the trek to find his wayward children, and finds more than he bargined for.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3135    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: I know where this is going, don’t quite know how I’m getting there. I’ve been out of writing for a while.

Spoilers for, well, in this part, “Ariel”, and a little from “Safe”

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“You want me to do what?”

Ten years Anna Faun had known Gabriel Tam, this was the first time she had ever questioned him.

“Teach me,” he replied as if he were speaking about a garden.

“Teach you what?”

She knew what, she just had to hear him say it again.

“Teach me everything you know about tracking people. All your tricks.”

“Why?”

“I have to find them. I have to do it myself.”

“Do what now?”

“I have to, Anna.”

Anna leaned back in her plush chair and surveyed her old friend. She knew he was a good, trust worthy man, that wasn’t the point. Gabriel not only had money, it was all he had ever known. He had grown up w/ servants to acquiesce to his every demand, rich food always on the table, people gravitated to him for social standing, nobody had ever told him “no”. Even she rarely did. Gabriel Tam had never walked in dirt, let alone work it.

He wouldn’t last a week doing what he was planning on doing.

“Gabriel, you don’t quite understand what you’re asking. You don’t know what the border worlds are like.”

“I’ve heard-”

“Hearing and experiencing are two vastly different things. Basic things like good food, clothing, or even baths in some places, are expensive, and draw attention. You do not want attention drawn to you. You will be required to interact with people that could get you arrested for mere association. You cannot be Gabriel Tam, you must become somebody you, yourself would never, ever associate with. It is not remotely easy.”

“I have to, Anna.”

“Why do you have to do it yourself? There’s plenty of people who would go looking for them.”

“They would go looking for the reward.”

“You don’t want them brought in?”

“I want to be sure before they are.”

“Gabriel, Simon was paranoid. What do you want to be sure of?”

H

Comments
Monday, 07 March 2005 07:24
Absolutely excellent! I loved it especially that this is not an angle covered already in any of the wealth of fanfiction stories. Not simply a variation on a theme and I could see Gabriel having quite a fight with his conscience but taking this route will make him a better man. Can't wait to see what happens next, kudos to you. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 March 2005 10:04
This is a fantastic set up for what looks to be a very interesting and unique storyline. It's a very refreshing twist on our tried and true plot. Mr. Tam, as a good if somewhat cowardice character who is finally facing up to his mistakes.
I am anxious to see how this story progresses and the reactions from River and Simon.

Mai
Monday, 07 March 2005 14:28
Excellent. I was wondering when someone would deal with the ramifications of the Tam siblings re-uniting with their parent(s) and dealing with the fall out. I was hoping to do this myself, but I'm glad someone beat me to the punch with something unique and exciting. More, please.

Monday, 07 March 2005 18:56
This is an intriguing start here! I like the idea of Gabriel Tam finally giving in to his emotions and trying to right the wrong. Great start! More!

- Soul
Tuesday, 08 March 2005 14:56
Shiny!!! I was wondering whether the Tams were stone politicians, or real people. Nicely played out... I look forward to the next episode!!

Keep Flyin'

K
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 March 2005 20:39
Very very good! I often wondered how a parent could let this happen without doing anything to find his children. Can't wait to read more
Friday, 11 March 2005 15:25
Wow, this was REALLY good. It was great to get some insight to the Tams and is nice to know they aren't so cold hearted like many of us have thought.

Keep up the good work! =o)
Wednesday, 15 June 2005 17:57
Hey. Just wanted to remind you. This is a really good story, and I'd like to see you continue with it.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 November 2005 05:47
This is a great beginning to a great series of stories. I love the premise, a guilty Gabriel Tam looking for his children. It is just so heart wrenching that he couldn't risk losing Simon as well, but, trying to keep what was left of his family together, resulted in his losing them all anyway. And, I think Anna is a wonderful character; I love how she hides her "backwater" accent.
Why, why are there no new chapters; can't someone please find a way to continue this story.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 November 2005 05:47
This is a great beginning to a great series of stories. I love the premise, a guilty Gabriel Tam looking for his children. It is just so heart wrenching that he couldn't risk losing Simon as well, but, trying to keep what was left of his family together, resulted in his losing them all anyway. And, I think Anna is a wonderful character; I love how she hides her "backwater" accent.
Why, why are there no new chapters; can't someone please find a way to continue this story.
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 12:39
Well written, and I am looking forward to more on this subject.
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 21:52
gasp... ME LOVE!!!
Sunday, 24 December 2006 21:33
Very well done, in every respect.

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