Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Precious Cargo

Saturday, November 19, 2005

Mal makes several mistakes and gets some unexpected cargo. A 100 word drabble.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2359    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I do not own Firefly

Precious Cargo

by April

His first mistake was not knowing what the cargo was.

His second was not reading that paper before he signed it.

His third was agreeing to wait till nightfall to pick it up

As soon as he saw the cargo he had tried to return the money and get out of it. When that didn’t work Jayne began swinging his gun around. That just made the situation worse.

In the end there was nothing he could do.

That was how he and Jayne ended up walking back to Serenity, three children trailing behind them. On their way to grandmother’s house.

Comments
Saturday, 19 November 2005 07:22
Heee!

Serenity and kids. What fun.
Saturday, 19 November 2005 08:47
Hurray for a great fanfic idea. You KNOW you've gotta go further on this, neh, April? What the heck are you doing chatting with me in the other room? Don't you know you've gotta get this finished for ISwallowedABug? He's waiting! No wait, that'd be me. I'M waiting! LOL.
Saturday, 19 November 2005 17:12
Heh!
Here I was wondering how many mistakes poor Mal could make in 100 words! Guess it just wasn't his day.

Saturday, 19 November 2005 18:14
aaw, c'mon...ya know ya can't just leave us swingin' in the wind!!! more!!!

b
Thursday, 24 November 2005 18:44
Too short! This promises to be a very entertaining tale though, keep it up:)
Saturday, 29 April 2006 12:31
HAHAHA!!

I can just picture Jayne stomping through town with children in tow!
MCQ
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 04:19
Very nice concept, April. Keep it up!! :)

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