Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Motivation Series 6: Happy Hour

Saturday, November 19, 2005

Mal takes the crew out to celebrate a job well done. Kaylee has a different sort of celebration in mind. (Next fic in my series, Simon/Kaylee, NC-17, yada yada.)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4503    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's note: Yeah, I know, this took FOREVER. You don't even wanna know...let's just say my mother is a psychotic devil-woman who doesn't know the pressure a fic writer is under. *sigh*

AN #2: I'm putting out a request to all my readers for plot bunnies, prompts, ideas, whatever you wanna call 'em. If I use your idea, I'll give you credit when I write the fic. If I don't use your idea...well, write it yourself! We need more people writing S/K smut, after all. ;)

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"Kaylee, you almost ready to go?" Simon called. He knocked on the door to the room that had been River's, until she and Kaylee had swapped rooms two weeks earlier. It had been River's idea to switch, when Mal had mentioned changing living arrangments so that Simon and Kaylee could be together without having to worry about disturbing the rest of the crew. He'd been concerned at first, but it hadn't lasted.

As strange as it was to have his sister suddenly be so much less dependant on him, it was also a great relief. And besides, now he finally had time and energy and thought to devote to Kaylee. He hadn't been able to even think of being with her like that before. That was what had kept him at a distance from her for eight long months. He'd been afraid of hurting her, or worse, of putting her in danger, either from the Alliance or another enemy. A shudder passed through him as he recalled Jubal Early's threats, the images that had flashed through his mind as a result of the bounty hunter's words. The thought of anyone harming Kaylee because of him...he pushed it to the back of his mind.

Instead, he thought about the past two weeks, of being close to Kaylee, with only two thin doors and a narrow hallway seperating them. And often less than that. Without even talking about it, they seemed to end up alternating, one night in her room, the next in his. Even when they didn't make love, they slept in each other's arms. Falling asleep to the sound of her heartbeat and quiet breathing, waking up with her in his arms, ma

Comments
Saturday, 19 November 2005 06:01
Wow I've never been the first to comment before! Makes me feel all special!

I love your Simon/Kaylee sex! I don't know any other way to put it! Its always great and the story is funny and so true to the show. Keep 'em coming (the chapters and Simon & Kaylee!).
Saturday, 19 November 2005 06:21
"Really? Tell me something, what's 'Jayne' for 'get lost?'"

"Oh, that's easy. 'Good morning.'"

Oh, lord. I haven't laughed that hard in a damn long time. Thanks to you, my wife now believes me to be completely insane.

As for plot bunnies....hmmmm - let me get my glass of rum and coke and think a sec. How about everybody gets hammered and starts playing poker, and Simon loses a large wager to Kaylee? Could be fun making him pay up. I leave this one in your more than capable hands, since I can't write smut to save my life.

Saturday, 19 November 2005 10:48
grr baby grr I love me sum NC -17!
i LMAO w/ Jayne's "Good Morning" joke!!!
Your such a great writer keep THIS HOTT STUFF Cumin' :cough: I mean Keep doin whatcha doin ;)
Saturday, 19 November 2005 11:17
A TEN as always, hun :D Like someone else said, I too can't write smut to save my life, but you sure have a great knack for it :)

Hm... ideas... I'm still kinda waiting for Mal and Jayne's mapped out future for Simon and Kaylee... lol...
Saturday, 19 November 2005 18:10
"Oh, for the love of...Can't take you two anywhere, can I?"
*falls off chair* my family now hold the same belief as ManicGiraffe's wife: that i am completely insane.
i'll get back to you re: the plot bunnies. sure i can think of SOMETHING...*wink wink dirty laugh*

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Sunday, 20 November 2005 00:41
REALLY great characterizations. That exchange with Jayne and Simon in the bar was fantastic. As for bunnies, it depends on if you wanna talk the story to the more serious side or more lighthearted side. I have tons of ideas for both. If you wanna hear em email me @ cpaigemcd@yahoo.com Keep it up either way. Looking forward to it.
JOY
Sunday, 20 November 2005 03:22
wonderfully steamy as usual! I like that Zoe is ok. I was worried about her. :)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 04:49
Loved the ending--you can completely picture the two of them looking anywhere but at Mal and stammering.
Sunday, 20 November 2005 04:53
The last one was me--see what happens when you dont log in and just start reading? Oh well, lets me make another comment: The exchange with Jayne and Simon was also hysterical.
Friday, 25 November 2005 02:23
Your stuff is fantastic! I'll have to see what else you've written besides this series. Thanks for sharing your work. :)

Stetchnik
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 13:04
Jayne: "Why's it that every time we run into trouble, everyone always figures it's me?"
Mal: "We've met you."

I love it!
Sunday, 29 January 2006 03:18
"oh for the love of...."

HOWL

Excellent. Hot. Kaylee would be the one to corrupt him.

Superbly written. Wonderful. Write more! :)
Monday, 01 May 2006 16:38
Lots of funny bits in this one, like talking 'Jayne' and him starting the trouble in the bar.
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 11:14
It's like 'Gone with the Wind'... Only filthy.
Keep up the good work (pun intended).

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