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Choices - Part 2

Friday, November 18, 2005

Inara goes looking for Mal.

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A/N: I guess I shoulda put this in part one, but I forgot!!! Takes place after Objects in Space, but before the 3 part comic Serenity, or the movie. No BDM Spoilers in this part.

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Choices – Part 2

Zhòu mà Mal, where are you?” cursed Inara as she made her way out of yet another seedy establishment, feeling like she’d need about a hundred showers to get clean again. She’d been to every saloon she could find within walking distance of Serenity, and still no sign of him. She was beginning to worry. And the streets would soon be unsafe for her to walk them alone. It had been early enough when she’d started her search, but now, several hours later, the sun was on the verge of setting, and soon it would be dark.

She stood and scanned the shops around her, searching for some clue as to where to look next. If she didn’t find something soon, she’d have to go back. God, what was she going to say to him, anyway? It didn’t matter, she just had to make sure he was safe, that he hadn’t gone and done something stupid and -- As her gaze traveled around the square, she stopped suddenly and turned back to a building she had initially skipped over, it’s neon sign flashing out an assortment of enticements. Something stupid, she thought. She crossed the street to stand outside ‘The Chapel of Love’, a low level brothel offering ‘Companionship and Christ’. Whoring and God, the two things he held the least respect for. Somehow she didn’t doubt that Mal would be inside.

Inara stepped through the door into an entryway draped with well-cut red and gold velvet. Three entrances clearly divided the house into its three purposes – brothel, saloon, and chapel. It was really quite upscale for an independent operation, though nothing compared to one of the Guild Houses, or even her own shuttle for that matter. But something about it bespoke pride and even honour in the place. It may be a whorehouse, but it was a respectable w

Comments
Friday, 18 November 2005 08:49
Lovely little scene. I just hope Inara doesn't end up hurting him again. Typical that the only services Mal wanted was the inside of a bottle. A little disappointed Inara would automatically think otherwise. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 18 November 2005 10:20
I love how the owner stops inara from telling her Mall ising her man hehe with a simple "of course"... ""sighs" i hope mal is ok and inara just does something jeez! ok well i am getting all worked ok ummm GoodJob! write more.
-OldSoul
Friday, 18 November 2005 10:52
I'm liking this a lot!

You write Inara very well, her mix of pragmatism and inborn respect. If manners won't get her there, bribery will, and she'll keep her composure no matter how much what she finds might hurt her.

Gab'relle is a really cool character and "Companionship and Christ" is about the coolest thing I've heard all morning. I laughed tears!

I'm looking forward to the next part a lot!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 14:57
Loved it!! Mal drunk should be nice and interesting, especially with Inara showing up! Can't wait for the next part!!

And I must say "Companionship and Christ" LMAO!
Friday, 18 November 2005 15:12
“companionship and christ"...yup...don’t think i need to say anything else

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 20:23
Excellent! He's only getting drunk! I am so relieved!!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 22:07
oh so typical mal! My jaw actually dropped to the keyboard when I read "you Nandi?" Great job - want more!
2X2
Saturday, 19 November 2005 05:27
Thank you so much everyone! I'm glad you liked the 'Companionship and Christ' so much... just seemed to fit so well together :o)
I'm working on the next part, hopefully it will be up this weekend, but it's taking a bit longer to write, plus, I've got weekend-y like things that need seein' to... But I'll do my best.
Thanks for all your encouragement!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 19 November 2005 23:23
Oh man, I am looking forward to Drunk Mal...kinda...sad I guess that I look forward to it ;)

Great Inara characterising.

*applause*

syzg
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 09:27
I really like Inara in this scene - excellent use of her, and of your OCs.

Beautifully written.

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