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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 9 - "I call Vera!"

Wednesday, November 9, 2005

Ninth chapter of my Simon/Kaylee series. And boy is it a long one! Mal's reaction to the news.

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AN: This isn't an original storyline, I've seen an other fic having it and one fic mentioning it, but as neither has continued with what happens afterwards I figured to give it a go. I'm sorry for Mal being a jerk in the beginning, but as I hope you see he has a good reason.

AN2: About the chineese phrase Mal said in the last chapter, no I didn't know that was the same phrase he had used when he caught Kaylee and Bester in the engine room, but boy did I laugh when it was pointed out. I had just gone through various chineese phrases to find one that could be suitable for Mal's reaction. That I had been so spot on, I had no idea. Anyways, enjoy the chapter. And COMMENT!

*** I call Vera! ***

- Preacher, I'd like these two to be wed before the end of this day.

Those were the words, Shepard Book were delivered, by Mal, who had on the occation "borrowed" Vera, Jayne's most beloved gun. Vera was of course pointed at the young doctor, who seemed unable to form a single thought, let alone word. At his side, the slightly frightened mechanic, seemingly struggling with something. She was rather pale and Book started to fear for her health.

- Captain, I would like you to lower your firearm, as well as to give me an explanation to why you've dragged the poor kids in here like this.

Book narrowed his eyes at the captain. Mal was ready to object, but upon seeing Kaylee's unnatural pale face, he obliged and the girl hurried out of the room, Simon following. They returned ten minutes later, Kaylee looking slightly better. They didn't dare to do otherwise. In the meantime Mal had let Book in on the situation.

- Now, if you could proceed, so we can all continue with our day, Mal said. - It would be swell. Got things to do.

- I'm not sure I like this rushed decision of yours, Captain, Book replied. - Marriage is not a step to be taken lightly.

- You believe a child deserves to grow up with his or her father?

- Of course.

- Then do your part in this and you'll assure the child to h

Comments
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 21:59
OOh! I love this chapter even more than the last! And I love it to death that its LONG! :D

Aw, Simon and Kaylee got married cuz of Mal but they still made it seem sweet. And then Inara and Mal's talk afterwards..Ooh!

And the ironic thing, I was watching the actual storyline when reading this.

My favorite line in the story:

""You're a boob, she said, before he managed saying anything. - I'm fine, Simon""

:D :D :D :D Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! btw, I just connected the with what Kaylee said to tease Simon is JaynesTown.

Woo, long review! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Thursday, 10 November 2005 00:16
Wow. This was wonderful. All of the chapters were wonderful. I had to read them all right now since I just found this site. :)

I love how you used different episodes throughout also.

I love S/K and you are doing a fine job. Please continue writing.
Thursday, 10 November 2005 01:05
Hee! Oh, Mal...awesome chapter, as usual.
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Thursday, 10 November 2005 02:25
Great story, keep going! I love Simon being cute!
It would have been funny to have Mal just marry them himself, though, him being captain of a ship and all.
Thursday, 10 November 2005 10:41
squeeeeee!!! nothing else on my mind except that sound...

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Friday, 11 November 2005 04:42
"- I'll marry you, he whispered, for only her to hear. - If you'll have me." Ohhhh, that was so lovely and I could just see Simon's eyes and his swai smile as he looked down into Kaylee's and said it. Nice shiny work, miss kitten. I told ya that before, but I mean it more when I read more of you.

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