Last Act
Tuesday, November 8, 2005
Serenity on the auction block
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4512
RATING: 9.0 (G)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Post-BDM. Really Post-BDM. Some spoilers. This is my first fanfic. Any feedback is appreciated. If there is interest, I will be glad to post more.
"Ladies and Gentlemen, the sole item in tonight's auction: the Firefly-class vessel Serenity."
The crowd that had been enjoying cocktails and gossip immediately took their seats. A holographic projection of a huge scarlet curtain had been hiding the ship from all potential buyers in the outdoor amphitheater. The auctioneer, a portly man of middle years who seemed to be enjoying himself a little too much, activated the curtain's control with a flourish. The curtain lowered slowly, revealing Serenity to the well-dressed crowd.
River Tam felt a pang of sadness at seeing Serenity on display. The ship had been first her escape, then her refuge, then her home for years. She remembered the first time she had flown her out of atmo, on this very moon. She looked down at her hands, going through the steps for takeoff from pure muscle memory, and was torn between a laugh and a sob.
Then the curtain disappeared entirely, and River was shocked and nearly overwhelmed by the emotions of the crowd. Greed, envy and acquisitiveness were there, as they were everywhere people competed for something. But the respect, the love, the...River could only describe it as awe...nearly broke through her defenses and washed her away. No Member of Parliament had ever commanded such adoration, or deserved it as much. Looking out from the stage, River could not help but smile at that thought.
Serenity was as beautiful tonight as River could ever remember seeing her, even with total recall and the memories of a dozen people to draw upon. The Firefly had been preened and polished, inside and out. Her metal skin gleamed under the diffuse light of the ion cloud. Her insignia looked as if it had been painted that morning. River knew the interior had been restored to its original condition as well, down to the flowers Kaylee had painted on the galley walls. The inter
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 05:50
You know, if FIREFLY came back after the movie and had like a seven year run like BUFFY, I think that would've been a great final episode.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 05:55
I think I'm gonna cry.
vena
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 06:02
You've got to write some of the intervening history. That would be fabulous.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 06:04
I did cry. *Sniff*. At least confirm for me that Josh Serra is Mal and Inara's kid. I mean, he doesn't have Mal's name, but, but, who else's kid could he be? That would make me feel a little better, at least. kinda wondering why these people can't live past 93, though...I mean this is the future, right? They should all live to be 150 and have bunches of kids and grandkids and great-grandkids...they should have been able to populate their own planet!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 10:06
shiny...
like my eyes with tears.
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 10:47
WOW, this was excellent but oh my the yearning it left in my heart with that big wide space where all our Big Damn Heroes should be! I loved that Serenity would finally end up not scrapped but kept as a piece of honoured history but also 'in the family' so to speak though my favourite bit was River and Zoe right at the end going to take 'our girl' for one last spin through the Black. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 13:27
It was one best Firefly Fanfic.
Made me feel good.
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 20:33
Neat concept, and well-written.
Am I the only one who thought of the opening to "Phantom of the Opera" while reading this?
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 20:55
No, Cub, I too heard those strains as I started reading, but they quickly faded as the tears started. :)
Beautiful. Delicious. Warm. Yeah, so clearly can see how it all could have ended up...
and the opening strains of the closing theme music as River pulls back on the stick and lifts Serenity into the air, just her and Zoe and all their memories....
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 19:38
heart. empty hole. crew. yeah...that about sums it up *wipes away tears*
b
Thursday, 10 November 2005 02:25
Well done!! Perfect ending!! You sure this is your first writing attempt?
Isn't it funny how Firefly inspires?
Thursday, 10 November 2005 02:54
Wow, folks, thank you for the awesome feedback! I had no idea this story would garner this kind of reception. I'm happy that you all liked it.
Anonymous: Damn right Joshua Serra is Mal and Inara's kid. I have an explanation for the name, too. I am taking Belacgod's suggestion and writing another history story, about the events on Josh's birthday. I'll post it when I'm done. Thank you for the push, Belacgod.
Safeat2nd: Yep. And yes, Firefly surely does.
Thursday, 10 November 2005 07:33
This story gave me the warm and fuzzies, and now I'm all teary, *sniff*.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 November 2005 04:34
Beautiful fic, thank you!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 03:45
That was simply amazing! I was blubbering like a baby (a hungry, angry baby). It also had some of the funniest momments, such as when Zoe says she always thought Serenity would be auctioned, but she thought it would be so the proceeds could be used toward the crews defence, or Jayne locking himself in his room for five days after the Mudders named him the hero of the revolution. Anxiously awaiting multiple prequels. Who did Jayne marry? What happened at Sihnon? Who are Te Jian Chan and Sierra? And I agree with reginaroadie, if firefly was ending a seven year run this would have made a wonderful finale. (p.s. you simply have to show us some of that wildly inaccurate romantic comedy that made Kerra Zhao a household name)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 11:14
oh, that was just... i uh.... ummmm....... good?? no, that doesn't cover it. stupendous??? nope, still not enough. shockingly amazingly fabulously wonderful????
Nope, still falss short.
Gimme more!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 03:01
This is a wonderful story, and a great way that I would have wanted to see any of the Serenity/Firefly to end. Would definately love to see more stories on the background you have mentioned.
Saturday, 25 March 2006 03:03
F---in unbelievable man. I ain't cried since I was 2 (tough life). But this is one powerful piece of Dole-mua. Don't take that the wrong way man. his is beutiful. Mal, I will always live by your code (sniff).
Sunday, 07 January 2007 18:08
What a truly beautiful story - particularly the way it hints at history and transition.
Thursday, 12 April 2007 20:32
Honestly thought I had commented on this when it was originally posted...guess I was deluded;)
Still...this was an utterly brilliant and beautiful piece of work, schooner! Like reginaroadie noted all those many months ago, had the series been given BtVS' run, I really think this would have made an utterly fabulous coda to their adventures.
Oh...and River's comments to Zoe about taking the old gal out for one last spin? Laughed my ass off from how spot on it was;D
BEB
Saturday, 05 May 2007 09:43
This really really rocked, schooner. You managed to hit the spot on all factors and leave people gasping for more. Me included.
hermitsrest
Wednesday, 15 August 2007 15:50
It has taken me a long time to read this fic, and now I wish I had read it sooner! This is great!
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